Critique my TL!? =P

[anarchyinc19]

So yea.... my first video, TL's my main. its a brawl match between me and me fwend...marios not his main..but hope you like it.
tell me what i need to work on. thx. :bee:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=ASvRiHNpvy8

[GTRocksUrSocks]

Get your spacing straight first off. Camp more with retreating SHDA and rang and stuff like that. Be smart with your attacks. Do not just run in and try to punish without having a camping game already established becuase you inturn will be the one to get punished.

I saw good DI after your arieal which is good but just work on ur spacing and the attack selection. One your put down a basis with ur range you should be able to beat your friends mario pretty easily.

But hey this is all just my opinion

[phe-gnome]

nice spike. dangerous move

[TriforceCore]

Good DI and "Rang" Control. Work on Rar, SHDA, bowcanceling.