My TL in progress

[Braw]

Toon link in progress online friendly match from earlier this week

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kX79iImyi_I

Its only one vid atm ill post more though so there can be some constructive critisism

Forgot i can edit

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NFhpZKq20kw

[Recognize]

The Good

You use bombs. (Thank God)
You Quick Draw
Fair grasp of simple AT's (bomb cancel lag)

You have semi mastered the games gravity. This is good as it will keep you quick and alot harder to hit.



The Bad
Ugh... your spacing was absolutely atrocious. You made no attempt at all to do it.

The Dair spam must stop. Makes you look like a ****ing nooblet.

The FSmash Spam must stop. Its a kill move. Use it when you want to BINGO kill someone.

You didn't see you use Bair or Fair once. This saddens me.

Didn't Zair. Great spacing move and always an addition to TL's mixup game.

What you need to work on.

Bair - USE IT.

Zair- USE IT.

SPACING IS THE KEY TO TL.

Otherwise I cant really tell how good your camping game is since Fox's reflector is G-Unit.

Once you learn how to do all the **** I just told you. Learn to spot dodge.

Thats all I can think of right now as its 1:am

[toktomo]

Toon link in progress online friendly match from earlier this week

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kX79iImyi_I

Its only one vid atm ill post more though so there can be some constructive critisism

Very good...some advice would to ease up on dairs lol, but I guess you heard that way too many times! I think you did a good job not spacing too much w/ Wolf, because he can take advantage of that w/ his laser. Overall good job, and keep on improving. I can't wait to have a TL match with you!!:)

[Braw]

heres another one http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NFhpZKq20kw

[ctk495]

You use dair too much imo it becomes predictable and you can easily be punish.