Rate my Toon Link!

[-sonny-]

http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=ezMRcBjqU2Q

Sorry, only one vid. I generally play like that in every match though unless I'm doing horribly.

[QUIVO]

Not enough bair and you need to work more on mindgames.

[l SOUP l]

More Bair, plus the Snake was kind of stupid >_>. But overall you did good, I liked when you had him on his last stock, he didn't know what to do XD.

[JesiahTEG]

Time for some JesiahTEG patented strats.

0:05- Anytime you shoot a normal arrow from far away, you may as well shoot a double.

0:12- I wouldn't risk pulling out a bomb so close to your opponent. You received a Bair to the face for it.

0:16- Huh? You had a Bair combo and you tried to go into a Utilt? This is a bad idea for so many reasons. If you hit with a Bair, you combo with it until you are at the edge, in which case you end it with an Fsmash. You want it to be as depreciated as possible, so it's impossible for your opponent to escape.

0:23- When you have Snake off the edge like that, don't stand back and throw projectiles. His recovery screams, "Rape me!" Do just that. That was an easy Dair spike for you, but instead you decided to throw a boomerang at him. Not good.

0:32- You stood right next to him and shot an arrow. You got Ftilted for it, and you need to avoid his Ftilt at all costs. If you are close, Dsmash or retreat aerial.

0:37- You had a free Dair kill here, but instead you chose to Bair him. You can't waste opportunities like this vs Snake. Again, rape his recovery whenever you get the chance.

0:40- You could have waited a bit longer and Uaired him.

1:11- Your spacing was bad, and you hit his shield. Don't ever do that vs Snake unless you can DI away in time. You paid for it with a stock.

1:23- Very nice timing on your Usmash after his airdodge.

1:35-1:45- You get way to close to him, and let him tilt/jab combo/Nair you all day. Keep your spacing.

2:37- Good combo, you could have kept going though. Should have ended with a reverse Nair.

2:44- He's on the ledge, good job pressuring him with projectiles.

Overall, your playstyle seems really campy and coming in for quick hits when you see an opening. Good strategy, but you can do a better job of it. First off, when camping I noticed a lot of your boomerangs/bombs were just thrown in random places. Aim them better to keep up the pressure. Second, when you get in your opponent's range, don't settle for 10% or 20% hits. Go for the long combos, make every opening count.

Things to note, that Snake was not very good, and WiFi is not an accurate judgement of skill so meh.

[-sonny-]

Time for some JesiahTEG patented strats.

0:05- Anytime you shoot a normal arrow from far away, you may as well shoot a double.

0:12- I wouldn't risk pulling out a bomb so close to your opponent. You received a Bair to the face for it.

0:16- Huh? You had a Bair combo and you tried to go into a Utilt? This is a bad idea for so many reasons. If you hit with a Bair, you combo with it until you are at the edge, in which case you end it with an Fsmash. You want it to be as depreciated as possible, so it's impossible for your opponent to escape.

0:23- When you have Snake off the edge like that, don't stand back and throw projectiles. His recovery screams, "Rape me!" Do just that. That was an easy Dair spike for you, but instead you decided to throw a boomerang at him. Not good.

0:32- You stood right next to him and shot an arrow. You got Ftilted for it, and you need to avoid his Ftilt at all costs. If you are close, Dsmash or retreat aerial.

0:37- You had a free Dair kill here, but instead you chose to Bair him. You can't waste opportunities like this vs Snake. Again, rape his recovery whenever you get the chance.

0:40- You could have waited a bit longer and Uaired him.

1:11- Your spacing was bad, and you hit his shield. Don't ever do that vs Snake unless you can DI away in time. You paid for it with a stock.

1:23- Very nice timing on your Usmash after his airdodge.

1:35-1:45- You get way to close to him, and let him tilt/jab combo/Nair you all day. Keep your spacing.

2:37- Good combo, you could have kept going though. Should have ended with a reverse Nair.

2:44- He's on the ledge, good job pressuring him with projectiles.

Overall, your playstyle seems really campy and coming in for quick hits when you see an opening. Good strategy, but you can do a better job of it. First off, when camping I noticed a lot of your boomerangs/bombs were just thrown in random places. Aim them better to keep up the pressure. Second, when you get in your opponent's range, don't settle for 10% or 20% hits. Go for the long combos, make every opening count.

Things to note, that Snake was not very good, and WiFi is not an accurate judgement of skill so meh.

Thanks for the tips. I agree that WiFi is most certainly not an accurate judgement of skill but I don't really have anyone decent to play with locally. xD

I usually have pretty good aim but a lot of those random boomerangs and bombs were from the delay. I tend to avoid dairs because for me I just find them way too risky off the edge and even if I do get a kill I don't really feel like it was worth it and I still won't want to try again. I agree with you that I should've kept some of those bair chains ... I have a bad habit of using the utilt a bit too much and try to follow that into bair but it usually doesn't work if the opponent knows how to DI.

Anyways, thanks again for the tips. I'll take them into consideration and try to get another video up in the future.

[JesiahTEG]

Yeah, WiFi really is stupid as hell. I was just playing it and I had to quit cuz you can't even combo correctly. Stupid.

[Hype]

Overall pretty good stuff:). Im' gonna have to disagree about off map Dair. Yes they are usually a bad idea but during a perdicable recovery such as snakes' its not as risky as you might think. he can't air dodge, I don't play snake but, I don't think he has full control over his DI during his up B either.

you play pretty similar to me, I make a few of the mistakes jesiahTEG pointed out too.