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BengalsRZ
12-29-2008, 10:43 PM
My friend who isn't a member wanted to have some of his matches critiqued, they are against my Marth.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YuzCMXGSan4&feature=channel_page
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U6B6YoUFZjk&feature=channel_page
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pi309DBeklw&feature=channel_page
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AYIV3zwKZzU&feature=channel_page

Any comments/criticisms would be nice, thanks!
stingers135
12-29-2008, 10:49 PM
Oh hey, you're the Marth with a lot of TL practice.

Funny seeing you here :laugh:
BengalsRZ
12-29-2008, 10:51 PM
Oh hey, you're the Marth with a lot of TL practice.

Funny seeing you here :laugh:

xD yeah whats up man. Fun games we had that time. This is the TL I play all the time :laugh:

Anyways, congrats to the eagles after dominating performance to get them into the playoffs.

*gets back on topic*
stingers135
12-29-2008, 10:59 PM
yesh man! Eagles got soooooooo lucky Tampa lost, but I love it :D All they have to do is beat the Vikings (shouldn't be that hard) and then beat the Giants again. Then we get to play the (?) Panthers. That'll be a fun one XD
Jman115
12-30-2008, 01:45 PM
Ill take a stab here.
You shield a lot, which against certain players will get you grabbed a lot. Not a bad thing to shield, just be careful wit it. Also OOS you should be doing more aerials. Jumping out of shield is TL's best option.

Don't think I saw any zair to bomb to Usmash/Ftilt/nair or anything like that. Its a great strategy to pick up.
A lot of the zairs were left as just that which isn't bad, but a lot more can be done with it.

He seems to have a very defensive style (maybe only against this Marth I don't know) but something to work on are your approaches. TL has a lot of approaches, especially with bair, zair and nair.

Projectile game seems pretty good. Off stage seemed good.

ALso he seems to grab a lot. Against his friend that might work because he knows his your playstyle so well, but in a tourney he is likely to see a lot of failed grabs which are super punishable.

If anyone wants to make any corrections be my guest. These are just my observations.
BengalsRZ
12-30-2008, 08:56 PM
Thanks :) I'll show him this. Anyone else wanna comment?