Rate my TL

[PrepareYourself]

I hope these are allowed.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V_JVUfOdy5E

[Shadow Moth]

Bombs are pretty good but you could've used a little more effectively. Dropping them and using them as an edge-guard. Also there were a lot of wasted u-smashes. Use them more carefully. not enough zairs either. You should use them more liberally. Other than that you did pretty good from what I can see.

[TLMSheikant]

Hmmm IDK prepare ur opponent didnt seem that good. U should use more zair. Moar bombs and vary with them a bit. Drop them from above to back air, ibomb, tether bomb and stuff. Usmash save for the kill.

[Rawrness]

I think some of your bomb mindgames are cool. Like the bairs in the begnning with teh bomb on the platform
and the bomb along with the forward smash

[Jman115]

No boomerang? I think it could definitely be utilized more. I also don't think the "wasted" usmashes are too big a deal on that stage as the high ceiling means it is easier to kill on the sides rather than above.

[Shadow Moth]

The ceiling isn't high enough that he won't get any kills of the top. Either way, it's not a very good habit to throw U-smashes around just because you might hit the opponent.

[PrepareYourself]

teh bomb on the platform

That was complete luck >_>

Hidden words ftw.

So...

Less random USmashes
More Zair
More Boomerang
Less predictablity with Bombs

Anything else?

[Shadow Moth]

Yeah.
More videos. It's pretty hard to see how someone really plays from just one video. There are too many uncontrollable factors that could alter our view of the match (opponent's skill, good/bad day game for you and/or your opponent, etc,etc).
We need MOAR!!!

[Asdioh]

That was complete luck >_>

Hidden words ftw.

So...

Less random USmashes
More Zair
More Boomerang
Less predictablity with Bombs

Anything else?

Yeah that's pretty much what I was going to say. I didn't notice the lack of boomerang, but now that I think of it, you definitely needed more, though I'm guessing you use it more against opponents that aren't.. Pit.

The Pit wasn't that good, but his Arrow skills were 1337 indeed. He stepped it up towards the end, but not enough.

Yeah...too many upsmashes, Zair use was ineffective and there wasn't enough of it.

Purple is my color.

Though I play TL so rarely now that I guess I can't claim the color :[

More Bair? Hey, saying "more Bair" is something that works 100% of the time when you rate Kirby videos, and TL's Bair is just as good (though it works a bit differently) so I can say it right =D

You's good though. Probably better than me...I liked your use of grounded Up B. Probably my favorite TL move to be honest >_>

[Hayang]

I have many johns to give but this is a critique thread so I will shut up :D

PrepU get some more vids up!

[PrepareYourself]

I'll accept any challenges. I want to get better.

And Hayang IS a good player, just he was too focused on arrows or something.

[Asdioh]

I have many johns to give but this is a critique thread so I will shut up :D

PrepU get some more vids up!It's ok I'd accept your johns.

You live in Connecticut? I was there just last week... Prepareyourself, do you live there? We should have played or something >_>

I'll play you online if you want PY, just send me a Pee Emm

[PrepareYourself]

Yeah, I live there.

What! We should have played.

lol I played a bunch of WiFi so I'm good for today.