Recent content by Incrediblorian

first id like to apoloigze for not critiqueing in a long time...for some reason i just stopped....but i will try and start doing it again, i just kinda felt like my critique were too infereior to the other ones ive seen that someone would almost be dissappointed to get my critique, but since you...

--Stain-- With a heavy heart ill stand to fight to forget it now, be reborn tonight its gonna be hard and take some will this is more than a bump, its a hill love can be an evil to big to contain but its the kind of thing to leave a stain a stain on my mind and soul a stain so strong...

critiwue numba 2..up up and awaaaaay DragonSlayersBak----- Ok,well anyone who writes poetry has certainly written about love, because love is an emotion and that’s what poetry is about, expressing emotion. So there is nothing to be ashamed of or afraid of here. The poem seems direct...

ok, first time critiquing, wish me luck ok, well bazooca lucca has now assigned me as a new critiquer, and since he is not a sports kinda guy, and i have played soccer my whole life i feel this is a good place to start, although its been so long since you posted this you probably already...

Cardboard Universe something new and different from what i usually do.... Six sides of neverendign fun one taped up and the opposite torn open with undying excitement the light shines in beaming all around the 4' by 3' by 6' playground of imagination I slither in as the 4 walls...

Abortion- For Affirmative Action- Against Biometric National Identification- Against Cloning- against Death Penalty- For Euthanasia/Mercy Killings- For France- Against Freedom of Speech, Freedom of Expression- For Genetic Engineering- against Gun Control- Against Homosexual Equality-...

this is awesome i think i found my new favorite board to post on, and like you said about the rhyming, its true and i have some poems without rhymes in them and they will follow, i dont want to clog up the topic with all my stuff but i just find this very helpful, well because i love to write...

Emotional Straightjacket This emotional straightjacket holding my love and my hate Taking this heartbreak was just another mistake Realizing a dream, it seems so easy Taking the next step, can make anyone queasy But all for that feeling we strive to achieve Makes it all better when its...

BAND NAME: 1) Reveille and 2) (hed) p.e. TYPE: rap/metal notes:these are 2 of my fave bands, although reveille jsut recently brok up:( they had 2 unbeleivably awesome and original albums, but you ahve to really like it to appreciate it, so give it time to settle in, and (hed) p.e. is a black...

lets see...i have to say Spongebob squarepants because i actually started a whole friggin fad thing through my high school about it, and now many know me by the name "sponge", meh go figure, but after that the list goes a little something like this... 1)SpongeBob 2)Family guy 3)yuyu hakusho...