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Red Arremer

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Mardyke said:
The trailer was well made Spadefox. Though I'm iffed by how overly cheesy it is. For one, you used too many adjectives for describing the villains, TOO MANY FLIPPIN' ADJECTIVES! DX
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o.O

6 of 'em.

Second, I know you're only trying to feature everyone, but doing so just made the trailer...well, long. Too long. Maybe if it were just some pictures on their own (of background - I just can't stand close-ups like those of characters from a critical perspective of trailers, even if I were the one who made their movesets) then the length wouldn't have been such a setback, but no. You just had to throw in cheesy one-liners for every five seconds, didn't you?
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Well I wanted to fully use the song, since it's really good... =/
 
flyinfilipino

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phatcat203 said:
Hello! I've been looking at this site for a while, but just never got around to joining... Anyways, is it too late to join/post a moveset? If it is, I'll just wait until MYM5. If it's not, does anyone know all the DBZ movesets that have been posted? I know about Trunks and Kid Goku, but that's it. I'm not asking for character specific cause I don't want to ruin the moveset.
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Hi!

http://chiefmendez.wordpress.com/movesets/

Check that page for a list of mostly every set in the contest so far. I don't recall any other DBZ characters, but if you see one on the list and want to do it anyway, go for it!
 
kitsuneko345

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*sending Sundance lots of apple pies on Pi Day, as
goldwyvern said:
dude, i dont know if i should shed a tear or crap myself. that was beautifully epic, well suspenced, and majestic*** [/blatantcatchphrasesteal]
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Why not do both? Just make sure you are near a certain Youtube toilet while doing so.

And don't worry about the deadline, phatcat, as It has been announced yet and we will inform you once it is. I think that there was that white & purple alien that is feminine-ish, but other wise, I don't remember any others. Welcome to the family, BTW. Enjoy youself and have fun.
 
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phatcat203 said:
Hello! I've been looking at this site for a while, but just never got around to joining... Anyways, is it too late to join/post a moveset? If it is, I'll just wait until MYM5. If it's not, does anyone know all the DBZ movesets that have been posted? I know about Trunks and Kid Goku, but that's it. I'm not asking for character specific cause I don't want to ruin the moveset.
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welcome! as far as i know, the only other DBZ moveset was frieza (all forms), other than that, youve got a lot of freedom!
 
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@Baloo and Count Bleck- Nice, definately going in my growing archive of characters I'll probably use for a BBQ someday.

@princesspeachluver13 and Zexion- In the words of Littlekuriboh: SUPER SPECIAL AWESOME! My favorite Org. XIII member and one I'm adding to the archive mentioned above simply because it would be fun to write dialougue for him. Only problems I see would be having to contort his clone's character model to perform some attacks because of being able to mimic all attacks that he counters.

@The Trophy Master and Professor Oak 2.0: 2.0 as in improved of course. Interesting mechanic of using different pokemon for different things. Sorry I didn't comment sooner, I lost my place in the thread and missed it the first time. Some of the taunts look a bit slow and um, Victory Pose-like. Archive'd!.


Crono's coming along, worried the A moves seem too similar since they all use his sword. Also, I'm really not good at numbers so I'm having trouble with damage/knockback/etc. percentages.If anyone has any suggestions to rectify these difficulties, I'd appreciate it.
 
Agi

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phatcat203 said:
Hello! I've been looking at this site for a while, but just never got around to joining... Anyways, is it too late to join/post a moveset? If it is, I'll just wait until MYM5. If it's not, does anyone know all the DBZ movesets that have been posted? I know about Trunks and Kid Goku, but that's it. I'm not asking for character specific cause I don't want to ruin the moveset.
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Regrettably, both of those HAVE been made this contest.

Trunks, by TWILTHERO (I think...) and Kid Goku by TheSundanceKid.

However, that shouldn't keep you from making one.
 
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lol awesome video Spade, loved the comment at the bottom of the page. XD


@Twilight:

Did you ever find my lightning attack?

Basically, a straight shock of lightning comes out of his arm, and if anyone was in water, they take some damage.

Although the original description made it a lot cooler than the description above.
 
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Yeah I found it Boom. I'm thinking something a little closer to the igame animation for the attack. I may use something similar if I decide to use his magical abilities for A moves.

Oh, and I think the new guy meant that he knows about the Trunks and Kid Goku movesets that have been posted, but wants to know if there are any others he should look for.

Lol at the song Kholdstare, loved that
Mr. Rodgers
was the winner, but you know Batman would never use a gun.
 
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Are you using Lightning or Lightning II?

Lightning looks too much like Pikachu's Thunder, and Lightning II is more of a Final Smash, imo.
 
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I found your intro better then Cruxis', but Cruxis' was presented better with the animated footage.

Although yours isn't needlessly long showing random footage. It was easy to sit through next to Cruxis'.

Although where are my movesets in there? Robotnik and Kefka are already on the side of good in your SM, yet Dimentio and Cortex/Tiny are still "enemies".

Bah.

Robotnik is excusable considering you got a really good fitting clip of him to go along with the "Sinister" text, but Kefka was just the standard official art.
 
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Sad how the chat destroyed the busiest thread on Smashboards. The atmosphere is almost void and desperate. As long as movesets can occur then it SHOULD be fine. I just rather the convos happen here rather than the chat.
 
SirKibble

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~Cruxis~ said:
Sad how the chat destroyed the busiest thread on Smashboards. The atmosphere is almost void and desperate. As long as movesets can occur then it SHOULD be fine. I just rather the convos happen here rather than the chat.
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I get that feeling here in the thread, too. It feels empty. I can't believe I'm saying this, but...

I kinda miss all the spamming here.
:dizzy:

But maybe it's for the best. :ohwell:
 
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Oh, but where is the chat now?

@Sonicboom2: Like you said, just Lightning is too much like Pikachu's, so I'm going with a weaker and lower range version of Lightning 2
 
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You know what? I just realized that Frog talks like a normal person in the DS Crono Trigger. Frog should not be talking NORMALLY! Half the reason he's COOL is that he talks like he learned his English from a book about king Arthur! I'm pretty mad about this and other ways Square screwed with one of my favorite games ever. INTERNET RAGE!

But seriously, you just watch, they'll remake it again in a few decades as a DS game remake on the <insert futuristic handheld here> and it'll be nothing like the original. It'll be a completely new game. And stupid. It's just horrible that my little brother saw me playing the original the other day, having watched me play the DS one before, and asked me why Frog was talking wierd.:urg:

Yeah, so, just remember that when Chrono Trigger: The 2nd Remake comes out in 2030, I predicted it.
 
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MarthTrinity, Chris, and Lemonade are the only ones in there now...

We discussed ZSS porn and the death of Sonic.
 
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Progress is being made on Carmilla and Pyramid Head...I'm trying to not make Carmilla TOO similar to her Castlevania Judgement self...but obviously I'm gonna be taking some moves from it...

Final Smash Idea?
Bloody Tears of course =)
 
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Lol, very true. I'm thinking of making her Special from Judgement as a Down B...I was always considering giving her a unique mechanic...

Something to do with her being a vampire, for instance she'd need to drink blood or her moves would become sluggish. She'd probably gain blood by using her Side B or grab attack...haven't really thought it out too much but I'm tossing around the idea of it xD

I'm also tossing around another character idea; Heather from Silent Hill 3...I feel like I could make her unique enough using only things from SH3 without making her similar to Henry at all...
 
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OK then, here it is:


BORED OF HFIL, THE DEMON KING PICCOLO HAS JOINED THE CLASH!


Background

Piccolo is one of the main characters in Dragon Ball Z, and one of the only non-Saiyan (he's a Namekian)fighters that can actually be useful in a fight. Mainly, though, he just supports the actual main character, Goku, or Goku's son, Gohan. Piccolo and Gohan have a very strong friendship, which started when Piccolo kidnapped Gohan and trained him for a year to fight against Nappa and Vegeta. The bond between the two is so strong that Piccolo has sacrificed himself to save Gohan multiple times. Later in the series, Piccolo fuses with another Namekian warrior named Nail to fight against Frieza, but his power was not enough to defeat him. During the Cell/Android Saga, he reunited with Kami, his "good half" that had separated from him in order to watch over and protect Earth. This grants him immense power, so that he is on an equal footing with Cell's first form. After Cell absorbs the Androids, however, Piccolo stands no chance against him. Piccolo's former pupil, Gohan, goes on to become the first person to reach Super Saiyan 2, and obliterates Cell. During the last Dragon Ball Z saga, the Buu Saga, his main role is to teach Goten and Trunks the Fusion Technique so that they can defeat Buu. However, Gotenks(their fused self) cannot defeat Buu, and both he and Piccolo, along with Gohan, are absorbed by Buu. Goku eventually defeats Buu with a Spirit Bomb, and peace is restored... Until DB:GT, in which Goku, his granddaughter, and Trunks go off into space to retrieve the Black Star Dragonballs. Piccolo doesn't play a very prominent role here, until the end when he helps transport people to the Tuffle planet before Earth blows up. He helps Goku out at the end, then decides to stay in HFIL(Home For Infinite Losers), but says he will get out one day. Now, he has, and in order to keep his skills sharp and to reminisce about the Tenkaichi Budokai, he has joined the Super Smash Brothers tournament!

MOVESET​

Stats

Size:7/10 He's about as tall as Snake is, with a relatively similar build.
Weight:8/10 OR 6/10 Normal human weight, higher than Marth, lower than Snake. The first one is higher because of his weighted cape and turban, the second is without the weighted clothes.
First Jump: 5/10 OR 8/10 Weights + Jump = Phail. No weights + Jump = :bee:
Second Jump: 5/10 OR 7/10 Rinse and repeat above statement.
Top Speed:5/10 OR 9/10 Weighted clothes don't help here, either, but without them, he's about Falcon's speed.
Traction:10/10 OR 7/10 Yeah, the cape thing is pretty big in how it effects his stats. It weighs him down, which helps with traction. Without it, it's average.
Power: 9/10 OR 5/10 The weights really help here, otherwise, it's not that good. NOTE: Projectile are energy based, and are not affected by this. It's just physical moves.
Range:10/10 Piccolo's range is one of, if not the, best in the game. His arms can extend, and he has very,very long range projectiles.
Priority:Well, this really varies, but I'd say, uh, 6?
Recovery:3/10 Pretty bad here, worse than Super Jump Punch or Ganondorf's.(Vertical, anyways)
Fall Speed: 1/10 OR 7/10 You'll see why later...
Crouch: Yes
Crawl: No
Wall Jump: No
Float: Yes, best in the game. Time for an explanation: Piccolo is from Dragon Ball Z, and all of the main fighters can fly. Piccolo is no exception, but his float is extremely different from what you're used to. First, it's automatic. As soon as your jump ends, you just stay there in the air. No, you can't use this as a camp, because, also unlike other floaters, you'll slowly descend to the ground. You can cancel it, by the way, which is why he has two fall speeds: one for float, one for normal. Second, Piccolo, since he fight the same in the air, has no aerials. Instead, he uses his normal tilts and A-A-A moves as his aerials, which gives him a really good air game, but the attacks have less knockback, and thus less killing, more combo power, than they do on the ground. Of course, this means that he has no Bair and must turn around to hit opponents, so yeah... This mechanic is very important to Piccolo's play style, and experts may find it harder to as him than beginners, because they're so used to normal aerials and such. Then again, beginners that master Piccolo may suffer in the long run, as they'll be used to the floating, air game=ground game+slow descent thing, and not normal play. By the way, no, you cannot use Smashes in the air, except for D-smash, which is a good spike. As a final note, this puts his horizontal recovery at OVER 9000!!!, which is pretty awesome, to say the least, especially since his vertical is so bad.(I feel sorry for comma's, I've abused them quite a bit.)

Animations

Standing: Piccolo just stands there, a slightly annoyed look on his face.
Idle: Piccolo cracks his neck and looks even more annoyed.
Walking: He just walks. Nothing special about it
Running: Piccolo runs, with arms at his sides, slightly behind him.
Dashing: He pushes his ki into it on this one. It looks similar to Kirby's Melee dash attack, but lighter, and has more area coverage.
Crouching: Piccolo gets down on one knee, doesn't take off too much height.
First Jump: Piccolo crouches a bit, the springs into the air.
Second Jump: Piccolo envelopes himself in ki and puts his fists at his sides.
Float: Looks the same as normal stance, but in the air.
Shield: Piccolo has a unique shield, taken from the Buu's Fury game. It can't be broken by force, but he takes 1/4 of the damage he would have taken from attack. His shield dissipates at a moderate pace.
Sidestep: Piccolo steps into the background of the stage, twisting his torso sideways.
Roll: Piccolo steps out of the stage and dashes backwards a short length.
Air Dodge: He shields in the air, instead of dodging. This makes him fall a little faster, and as such can be used for mindgames.
Trip: Piccolo half-trips, really, thanks to his reflexes. However, it's essentially the same, but it looks a little like when you stand on the very edge of a platform, except you stumble forward a little bit.
Asleep: Piccolo collapses, laying face down. He can be put to sleep in the air, and if that happens, you'll fall straight down, hit the ground, take 4% damage, and wake up.
Dizzy: He grabs his head, looking like he has a headache(more like hangover) and sways back and forth.

Specials

B-Special Beam Cannon:: This attack has its ups and downs, but mostly downs. It is devastatingly powerful, dealing 55% maximum damage, but has lag that would make Chuck Norris cry for his mommy(please don't roundhouse kick me!). Piccolo puts his fingers to his forehead, and starts to charge. After three seconds, you'll hear a "ping," indicating that the move is prepared, and you can stop charging. This does not mean that it is fully charged, however, just that you can stop charging for now, if you cancel before the ping, it will completely stop the move. However, after you prepare the move, you will no longer have to wait three seconds before you can stop charging. Anyways, the full charge time is 13 seconds, but you can store it, and it doesn't go away if you die, so all is not lost. Now it is, though: The lag. When you launch it, no matter what the charge, Piccolo will yell, "Special...Beam...(at this point he takes his fingers off of his forehead)CANNON!!!" which takes a full 3.5 seconds, more than enough time for your opponent to KO you. Then, you fire a continuous beam of energy from your fingertips for five seconds, and if you miss, you just keep firing, so you'll probably get hit from behind....yeah. After it's done, you're stunned for three seconds, which won't be a problem, because you either hit them, or they've already KO'd you. It is very powerful, though, dealing 17% "uncharged"(takes three seconds just to set up) and 55% fully charged. That's 10% a second, then a finishing hit for 5%, which is what deals the knockback. The good side, besides the damage and knockback, to all that lag is that if you hit, the Cannon goes right through the enemy, and they can't DI out of it, so you won't get screwed over too much. And if this hits an obstacle, it causes a mini Smartbomb effect, which deals 15% damage altogether, so the move has a cap of 70% damage.

How to use this: Ummm... don't? Really, though, your best bet with this move is to charge it up, then just don't use it. This is in a tournament, though. It's fun to use in friendly matches, where $5,000 isn't riding on the match. However, if you get the chance to use it, go for it. It's Piccolo's strongest move, by far.

Side B-Light Grenade: Another projectile? Yep, but this one is totally different. For one, it has very, very little lag. Two, it's a ball(kinda), not a beam, three, it's faster, and four, you'll actually USE IT! When I say little lag, I mean it. This only takes .3 seconds to fully charge, and there's only .1 seconds of end lag and starting lag, meaning you can get two off in one second! The damage, uncharged, is 4%. Full charge, it's 7%, meaning 14% damage a second. It is pretty fast, but can be avoided, about like Samus' fully charged Charge Shot. By the way, you can hold the charge, but not store it.

How to use this: Spam this! This is like Piccolo's Mach Tornado! Two shots a second is pretty fast, and the damage is good. The one thing to watch out for, though, is Fox. You see, if Light Grenade touches ANYTHING besides another character, it will hold true to its name and explode, dealing 12% damage and a little less than a bomb-omb's worth of knockback. This includes other projectiles, and since Fox fires faster than you, you have to watch it with him. This also applies to anyone who has multiple, fast-traveling projectiles, such as Sheik.

Up B-Ki Flare:This move functions differently depending on where it's used. On the ground, Ki flares up around Piccolo, dealing 13% damage and moderate knockback to anyone near him. In the air, however, it deals only 8%, and raises you a little. As I said before, this is not a good recovery move by any means. You're better off just trying to float back to the stage, or use a taunt, which I'll get to later on.,,

How to use this: Only use this move when you are directly under the stage, cause there is no way to aim it, and it gets no horizontal movement at all. On the ground, though, it's a pretty good technique, very useful as a "Get away from me!" thing, with decent damage to boot.

Down B-Materialize: In the show, Piccolo could materialize things out of thin air, though it was hardly ever shown. I've taken advantage of that with this move, which summons a random item to appear in Piccolo's hand. These are usually fairly powerful, and can help a lot in a fight, especially with items off;). This isn't completely random, though, as some items are excluded. Here's a list(Note: they are all equally probable):

Beam Sword
Fan
Hammer HEAD
Home Run Bat
Lip's Stick
Bomb-omb
Motion Sensor Bomb
Gooey Bomb
Mr. Saturn
Poke Ball
Bumper
Deku Nut
Cracker Launcher
Pitfall(useful for Special Beam Cannon!)
Smoke Ball(automatically sticks to you)
Team Healer
Unira
Senzu Bean
Snake's Hand Grenade
Piece of Samus' suit​

Oh, and if Snake is on the field, Grenades become a little more likely, and the next time Snake throws a Grenade, nothing will happen, and he'll just pat his pockets to no avail.

Basic Attacks:

A/AA/AAA-Extension-2%/2%/3%-Piccolo does a normal punch, then a slightly longer punch, then a really long punch. Has great range, when compared to other AAA combos.

Ftilt-Stretch Jab-7%-Piccolo jabs forward, with his arm stretching to 2.5 times its normal length. Okay knockback ,but that's it.

Utilt-Giraffe-5%-Piccolo stretches his neck, shooting his head into the air. Good range above him, about 3/4 as tall as he is.

Dtilt-Snap Kick-4%-Piccolo does a very low, long-reaching kick. Once again, good range, and a good chance of tripping. IN AIR-Endless Leg-1/8%-Piccolo stretches his leg as far as he can downward. This has the best range of any physical attack, going down as far as Sonic's Dair. The closer the opponent when hit, the more damage, down to 2%. It does 1% if they're hit while the leg is being retracted.

Dashing-Ki Flare Two-6%-Piccolo flares his ki, which acts as his dash attack. Weak, but it gives his dash a burst of speed, which is helpful if you have on the cape.

Rising Attack-Flip Up-3/4%-Piccolo flips up. Its very fast, and has no end lag. If you hold up, he'll automatically jump, putting him in the air.

Ledge<100%-Generic Ki Blast-10%-Piccolo shoots a burst of Ki from his hand, and while it is short ranged, it has good knockback and (relatively) good damage.

Ledge>100%-Ki Spark-5%-Piccolo attempts to do his first ledge attack, but is too weak, and only a small spark appears. Stuns the opponent, and they essentially Wavedash backwards a bit.

Smashes

Fsmash-Scatter Shot-11/26%-Piccolo brings back his right hand,palm open and fingers folded forward, and charges Ki in it. After 2 seconds, he thrusts his arm forward, shooting small orbs of energy forward. The range is 1.5 times Mario's Fsmash. The damage depends not only on the charge, but also on the number of shots that hit. You'll want to use this often, as the range, damage, and knockback are all remarkable. However, there's a 20% chance that the next time you use this attack, it will only shoot six orbs, instead of the usual thirteen, meaning that the damage and knockback will be reduced to less than half their normal amount!

Usmash-Vertical Knee-8/19%-Piccolo takes a Matrix stance, but with his knee slightly raised, then jabs the knee straight up into the air, lifting himself off the ground about a Kirby's height. Great vertical knockback.

Dsmash-Destructive Wave-12-22%-Small waves form at Piccolo's sides. When it's done charging, they shoot out a little ways from Piccolo, dealing massive, but completely horizontal, knockback.

Grabs-Piccolo can air grab, but will fall much faster while he is holding a foe, and if he hits the ground, the grab will be canceled.

Grab Attack-Ki shock-4%-Piccolo's grab attack shocks the opponent for okay damage, for a grab attack.

Fthrow-Ki Burst-10%-Piccolo throws the foe and immediately releases a big burst of ki. This is good for hitting more than one foe, but that's about it, as it knocks them too far for a chain grab and not far enough to be a good KO move.

Bthrow-Electrocute-14%-It looks as if Piccolo is doing his Grab Attack, but he puts much more ki into it, then casually tosses the foe backwards.

Uthrow-Mini Beam Cannon-13%-Piccolo tosses his opponent high into the air, then launches a smaller version of the Special Beam Cannon at them. This has no knockback, and the opponent falls 3x as fast as usual on the way back down. This means its a chaingrab godsend against some characters, and a punishable fluke with others.

Dthrow-Gekiretsu Madan-16%-Piccolo throws his foe onto the ground, then launches his Gekiretsu Madan technique, which is a barrage of 16 weak ki blasts. This is Piccolo's strongest throw, and can be chaingrabbed, but it is difficult and requires expert timing.

Final Smash: Merge with Kami

The screen cuts to Piccolo, who teleports to Kami's Lookout. Piccolo approaches Kami, the two look at each other, and then a white flash blocks out the screen for a few seconds. After the flash, Piccolo is back on stage, but has no cape, and is still glowing, but it's only gold now. During this transformation, he is a little faster, and all of his attacks do 5% more damage %(like 50+5%=55%, not 52.5%). However, this form lasts three minutes, a very long time. During this time, Smash Balls WILL appear, and if you get another one, Piccolo will be able to execute his TRUE Final Smash- Hellzone Grenade!

Hellzone Grenade
Piccolo's true Final Smash, this attack will automatically execute right as Piccolo is exiting Super Namek form. He will stay in Super Namek form for the entire duration of Hellzone Grenade, but will revert back to normal afterward. Piccolo raises his hands to the sky, and forms a huge ball of energy that resembles an orange Spirit Bomb. After it has been fully formed, it splits into 100 orbs the size of a fully charged Charge Shot. These orbs then rain down upon all opponents, slightly homing in on them. The orbs deal 5% damage each--for a total of 500% cumulative damage! The orbs deal no knockback, though, that's up to you, as the balls of ki also paralyze your opponents! This is a very deadly Final, but there's a catch: you have to get it. No matter what. If you don't, you'll lose three stocks and deal less damage for two additional stocks. This is a side-effect of having too much energy pent up upon reverting back.:(


Play Style: Cunning Namek

You have to be intelligent to play Piccolo, as there's no limit to how you can play him, and aside from a few things, there are no requirements for any playstyle you use. Of couse, mastering Light Grenade and Scatter Shot is a must, but that's about it. The possibilities are endless here. You can camp, with Piccolo's awesome range, or go on a full-blown rampage all over the stage with his devastating attacks. You can leave his cape on for a more aggressive playstyle, or take it off for a campier, safer one. The only thing I can recommend is: use Light Grenade! Seriously, it's his best move in terms of overall range, power, speed, and usability. Also, for epic pwnage, Hellzone Grenade on all four opponents, then Special Beam Cannon them all while their stunned and can't defend themselves.:laugh: Sure, you'll be known far and wide as the cheapest son of a ***** to walk the planet, but it's worth it.


Taunts

Up Taunt- Remove Cape-Piccolo grabs his cape and yanks it off very quickly, then unravels his turban and wraps the cape around, then proceeds to toss it on the ground under him. This is a very important mechanic, as it allows Piccolo to switch from his heavy mode to his middle-light mode. This is, unfortunately, one-way, and he must die to change back into his normal mode.

Side Taunt-Forgotten Days-Piccolo takes out a model of Shenron, the wish-granting dragon, and says, "Those days are gone forever," sighs, and puts it away. This taunt shows that he just may have a little Kami left in him after all.

Down Taunt-Not-so-fond memories-Can only be used at night. Piccolo looks at the moon, wherever it may be, shudders, and shoots a ki blast at it. If there is no moon visible, he looks straight up. A reference to Gohan's Oozaru transformation in the early chapters of Dragon Ball Z. The ki blast is just visual, no damage or effects of any kind.

Win Poses

Win 1-Rice Cooker-Piccolo takes out the rice cooker his father was trapped in, studies it, then puts it away.

Win 2-Super Namek-Piccolo is wearing his Super Namek clothes, and says, "I am no longer Kami nor Piccolo, I am the Namek who has long since forgotten his name."

Win 3-Gohan's Sword-Piccolo apparently found and kept that sword he gave Gohan. He takes it out, swings it a little, and re-sheathes it.

Lose-Annoyed-Piccolo just stands there, his arms folded.

Kirby Hat-Kirby dons Piccolo's cape and turban. They don't affect his speed,power,jumping,etc. though. Kirby's Special Beam Cannon takes just as long to charge, but is a little less laggy, and deals less damage.

Assist Trophy-Teen Gohan
Teen Gohan appears, and it seems as if he is completely useless, until someone hits him, that is. He'll shout, "You'll pay for that!" and go into Super Saiyan Rage mode. Here, he'll fly around at a speed faster than Super Sonic, and working in the same way. Occasionally, he'll fire a Kamehameha at the nearest enemy. He does 15% damage when he hits someone, and the Kamehameha does 30% damage. However, this Assist Trophy is short-lived-it only lasts 10 seconds, including the time it takes for someone to hit it.
 
Mardyke

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Spadefox said:
o.O

6 of 'em.
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Precisely. That's still too many from a literary perspective, especially for describing the one thing. My advice would have been to break it off at two or three, then add a couple of sentences to describe it in further detail (e.g. "...driven by a lust for control...which unites them under one banner..." or what would be more fitting).



Well I wanted to fully use the song, since it's really good... =/
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Don't you just HATE it when mixing rears its ugly head?
Suffice to say there's a reason why most professional trailers never work in the whole song; even if you're showing off, it's still a trailer, not a part of the show itself.


If it helps, I like it more than Cruxis'. :D
 
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Mardyke said:
Precisely. That's still too many from a literary perspective, especially for describing the one thing. My advice would have been to break it off at two or three, then add a couple of sentences to describe it in further detail (e.g. "...driven by a lust for control...which unites them under one banner..." or what would be more fitting).
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Now that you say that, I guess that would have been better. But I hardly watch trailers for games because I want all the surprise to their release.
Besides, it was my first video like that, so I guess that makes an excuse... v.v
 
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Spadefox said:
Now that you say that, I guess that would have been better. But I hardly watch trailers for games because I want all the surprise to their release.
Besides, it was my first video like that, so I guess that makes an excuse... v.v
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NO JOHNS! :mad:

That and a critic usually criticises when he likes the person/content he sees and wants to see it improve. There's no problem seeing as it's your first try. Technically if you want to make it like a videogame trailer then you'd be showing game footage, which would be much more exciting...but impossible. :psycho:

On the bright side, there's the actual Adventure Mode to also do well and avoid mistakes with. :D
 
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Tolerance at the Limit

Characters Introduced so far

Sandbags:

  • Sirkibble
  • Chief Mendez
  • MasterWarlord
  • KingK.Rool
  • Chris Lionheart
Saturns:

  • Commader Blitzkreig
  • Dancingfrogman
  • Hyper_Ridley
  • Iron Thorn
  • Junahu
  • TWILTHERO
  • Greatclaymonkey
  • Fawriel
Primids:

  • Spadefox
  • Smashbot226
  • Agidius
  • Sonic the Baron
  • Darkserenade
  • Smashbromike
  • GenericTakoKid
  • Lenus Altair
  • TheSundanceKid

Prologue Part 1

*in a common narrator’s voice*: This common place we all live in, is ruled by a god, named “Sirkibble”, this powerful being gave some of his power to his most trusted and reliable friends, who are: Masterwarlord, Chief Mendez, Chris Lionheart and KingK.Rool. These five powerful beings named themselves the “Sandbags”. These five gods are currently at war with there own citizens, which they name them as the “Primids”.

This conflict started back in the end of September, early October, when the most powerful god of the world was called “Commander Blitzkreig” who also had 4 other powerful gods, who are still minor Gods at the present, who were Masterwarlord, Chief Mendez, Chris Lionheart and Sirkibble (Commander Blitzkreig announced his retirement, and gave the rest of his power to the chosen minor God Sirkibble). At this event, one brave primid stood up to these 5 Gods, and shouted in a furious tone “Enough”. The gods all look to this one person, who is known as Spadefox. Masterwarlord looked at this lone primid in a disgusted way, while Chief Mendez started chuckling to himself. The Commander said in a calm way “What’s all the fuss about?”, Spadefox busted out in a angry manor “You lot treat use all like dirt, we work for long hours to get nothing, We deserve respect”, one primid looks onto this brave person, who is called Smashbot226, and stands up with Spadefox, and a few more Primids join. MasterWarlord bursts out “Ha, what can you little puny Primids do to change what we do?” Spadefox exclaims “When you least expect it, we’ll strike and get our freedom, no matter what the consequences, we’ll prevail”, MasterWarlord goes “Oh is that so? With that tone, you won’t know what coming to you lots” Spadefox and a few loyal Primids turn there back, spit on the ground below them, and walk off to their homes.

Prologue part 2

At the blink of sun set, the sandbags are worn out on this long drawn out day. Commander Blitzkreig is at the dinner table, wondering what his dinner is is going to be. Sirkibble, Chris Lionheart and Chief Mendez enter the room together, laughing together at presumably a joke. They sit on a long drawn out table, which has candles lit up. Chief Mendez stomach growls, tapping his watch saying “Come on come on, hurry up”. After this, we hear a thud, Lionheart looks around, and then we hear another thud. The great Commander calls his Mr Saturns to see what the trouble is. The camera looks on out of the window, which sees fireworks blasting off, but not into the sky, but directly at the Gods castle. Commander Blitzkreig bellows out “Their behaviour has got to stop, I thought I did a good job disciplining them, they need to get taught a lesson which then will not forget. Sandbags and Mr Saturns, pack your bags, as we’re preparing for War!”. Sirkibble looked shocked; Chris and the chief don’t know what to do, while we have an extreme close up of MasterWarlords face, showing his mouth slowly showing a grin. This war lasted for about 4 weeks and the War has reached stalemate. We look upon the battlefield, we see corpse on the floor, weapons on the ground, bombs blowing up. In this war however, none of the people we know got murdered in the middle of the conflict thankfully. We look onto Spadefox, Smashbot226, and another primid named “Agidius”, it looks like their loading up a bazooka at one of the Saturns weaponry factories. Upon Smashbot226 about to press the trigger, a screen appears with Commander Blitzkreig face on it. Commander Blitzkreig coughs before making his speech “This war has gone no where, no side is winning or losing at present. I say that this conflict has to end, and I’m ending this war. I’ve got a special announcement I have to say” The camera first looks at the face on shocked Primids faces as they look up to the huge screen, and then the camera goes into the Sandbags home, which has Sirkibble, Chris Lionheart, Chief Mendez and a few fellow sandbags look on, having surprised looks on their faces, while KingK.Rool is at the back of the room in a dark shadow across his eyes, and MasterWarlord is nowhere to be seen. Commander Blitzkreig continues his speech “It comes to that time and place every living being here has to face. I have announced my retirement” The Sandbags look at each other, Primids look at each other and shouts out “What?”. Commander Blitzkreig, having a tear run down his face, continues “I’m giving one of my fellow sandbags the power to be the most powerful leader in this world”. We look onto Warlords face in a different room, his eyes light up, and his ears twitch up. KingK.Rool slightly tilts his head up to this message. Commader Blitzkreig ends his speech saying “Sirkibble, I’m giving you the power to be the leader of this whole world, do you want to take this position?” Sirkibble looked stunned at what the Commander said, but he nods, and we walks up to him, and shakes his hands, and then hugs him, saying thank you to the Commanders ears. Chief Mendez, Chris Lionheart and the Saturns look happy for Sirkibble, and claps him. We look onto the Primids face, looking happy, as they think the nicest leader has been promoted to the top class, and they have high hopes about him, then we look onto MasterWarlords face, saddened and frustrated, stomps out of the room he was in, a closes the door with a big bang. KingK.Rool whispers to himself “He won’t do that good” a walks out the room normally.

And now, this is the present day.

Chapter 1, Part 1: The Arrival of a new leader

Sirkibble, being the newest leader of the world, decided to throw a party for his fellow Sandbags and Saturns for taking up the job. The party is massive, got all the party food, lights, music, and don’t forget the booze now. We see 2 Saturns preparing to get ready, these 2 sandbags are named Dancingfrogman, and Hyper_Ridley. Dancingfrogman is a bit small, and has a standard figure, though he needs to shave that moustache of big time. Hyper_Ridley, is about 6 foot and is, let say, more better looking than Dancingfrogman. Hyper_Ridley, putting deodorant around his pits, turns to Dancingfrogman and goes “ready to go yet?” Dancingfrogman, struggling goes “Almost, my flies are stuck” Hyper_Ridley face palms and chuckles to himself, and replies back “oh, what are you like?” Dancingfrogman returned “There we go *zips up* lets get ready to rock this party bro” Hyper_Ridley looks at Dancingfrogman, and high-fives each other before walking out of presumably their bedroom. Sirkibble, Chris Lionheart and Chief Mendez are near the tables, laughing and clearly having a good time; Sirkibble turns his head and has a face which suggests his wondering where Warlord and KingK.rool is. Hyper_Ridley and Dancingfrogman headed of to the table which has the booze and food on; Dancingfrogman looks on at this woman with a low cut top, and has an amazing figure, who is a Saturn, named Iron Thorn. Dancingfrogman looks towards Hyper_Ridley and goes “look at that cracker over there” Dancingfrogman points towards her, and Hyper_Ridley replies “Nah, she’s a league above you mai boy” Dancingfrogman “Your placing your bets are you?”. The camera then goes towards this woman, and you can see her ears are burning, but she hasn’t got a clue what Dancingfrogman and Hyper is talking about. We look onto a dark room, which we can see MasterWarlord making a potion of some sort; we can see him constantly looking at a dusty old book every other second. Commander Blitzkreig was enjoying the party, but he has had a very bad cold for 3 weeks, Chris Lionheart goes towards the Commander and places his hand on his shoulder, saying “I know you’re enjoying the part and all, but I think you need to have a rest to day, you’ve been up all day” Commander looks at him, coughs, and then nods. Chris tucks him well underneath his king sized bed, and says “Good night, don’t let the bed time bugs bite”. In one corner of the room, its pitch black, while there’s some light in the room. MasterWarlord hears that Chris has put the old ruler into bed, and he sticks the potion into the air before saying quietly “It’s time”, and MasterWarlord creeps out slowly.

Chapter 1, Part 2: The end of the first new day

We look onto Dancingfrogman and Hyper_Ridley again, and we see Dancingfrogman walk casually towards Iron Thorn, who is minding her own business. We can see Hyper_Ridley chuckling to himself as Dancingfrogman approaches her. Dancingfrogman puts his hand on her shoulder, which shocks her, which he says “Hey baby, how you doing”, still in shock, Iron thorn replies “wha..who…who are you? Dancingfrogman replies back with a smile on his face “I’m Dancingfrogman, I’ve been eyeing you up or night…lets have a dance.” Iron thorn slaps Dancingfrogman and shouts out “Get lost you perv” which Dancingfrogman replies “Not my head, I’ve hit it of my cabinet 3 times already” Iron Thorn looks at Dancingfrogman in disgust, and blurts out “get out of my way” Iron Thorn starts barging her way out of the party, and the camera looks on from behind Hyper_Ridleys, and we can see him sipping on some wine, and he’s chuckling to himself as Dancingfrogman chases Iron Thorn. We see Dancingfrogman catch her up and put his left hand on her shoulder again, which Iron Thorn pushes off, and turns around and slaps him to the ground, and leaves the room. Hyper_Ridley stood over Dancingfrogman, and says with a sarcastic voice “ooo you pulled her like a pro”, Dancingfrogman dusts his legs off and stands up, look at Hyper_Ridley and shakes his head and walks off to the food. We can see Hyper_Ridley chuckling to himself before walking off. We then look at MasterWarlord slowly walking towards the room which Blitzkrieg is sleeping in, he looks to his left, and then to his right before entering the room. MasterWarlord goes up to Commander Blitzkrieg and says “You should’ve elected me to be the newest leader, but since you didn’t think hard and wise about it, you will have to suff…” A dark voice is heard “Do you really think that’s a wise idea?” MasterWarlord, shocked, accidentally spills his potion, he goes towards the ground at the spilt potion, and turns his head to the dark corner of the room, and says with a crackle in the voice “Whose there?”, the camera zooms into the mouth of this person and replies “I thought you would know, after all, we do work together!” MasterWarlord replies “King…K.Rool?” KingK.Rool replies with “I knew you would clock on!” MasterWarlord, still in shock goes “Why…why you here?” KingK.Rool replies “I knew what you were going to do, so I decided to stop you! Didn’t you think of what the consequences would be?” MasterWarlord replies back “I thought that…” KingK.Rool interrupts “You didn’t think at all didn’t you? Well, since that potion is now wasted, I guess there’s no point of you being here.” MasterWarlord, slowly backs off out of the door, and walks into the party casually, to try and hide the “Suspicious” look. We look onto KingK.Rools mouth again, and he has a half smile and replies “…fool” and leaves the room. As MasterWarlord walks up to the other sandbags, he goes “Sorry, I was doing jobs around here” MasterWarlord moved his eyes to his left as he says this. Chris Lionheart goes “About time you arrived, you must some great stuff. At least you’re here now, have you seen KingK.Rool yet?” MasterWarlord goes “Errr nope, I haven’t seen him this whole day, I’d thought he would be here” Sirkibble replies “awww man, that’s a shame, it’s not a party without the whole lot!” Chief Mendez replies “His the one whose missing out, if he doesn’t want to join in, it’s his own loss”

Chapter 1, Part 3: The Second Morning:

We look into a different room in the Sandbag castle, and we see an alarm clock going of at 7:00 in the morning, the person yawns, and we look onto a Saturn, named Junahu. Junahu gets up, and he looks over at the other side of the bed, which has a big bump there, so somebody must be sleeping there. Junahu gets up, and then his mobile phone starts to ring. Junahu looks at the phone, and it’s from Hyper_Ridley. Junahu picks the phone up and says “Hey there Ridley”, which he replies to “Hello to you too. Hey, you missed one of the best parties going, it was a shame you couldn’t come, and Dancingfrogman made a right prat of himself” Junahu replies back with “heheha. I know, but I did have a surprise when my girlfriend came back to the house, she seemed… sad.” Hyper_Ridley goes “You have a girlfriend now?” Which Junahu answers back “Didn’t I tell you? I’m going out with a gorgeous girl named Iron Thorn” Hyper_Ridley gulps at this and says “That’s… that’s lovely to hear. Why did she leave the party?” Which Junahu replies with “She said she was getting eyed up and down by some sick perv!” “I see” Hyper_Ridley says back, which Junahu says back with a happy tone in his voice “Although it wasn’t all bad, I mean, she’s not a virgin anymore” Which Hyper_Ridley replies back with “That’s lovely to hear, we better get ready now, so I’ll see you soon” Junahu replies with “Bye bye” and then Hyper_Ridley shouts the phone down. Hyper_Ridley looks at his sleeping room mate Dancingfrogman, and HR mutters underneath his breath “Oh ****” before getting ready for work.
We now look at KingK.Rool, who’s sitting on a chair, saying “MasterWarlord always wants to take out the bigger man first, what a bad decision, you have to start low to get to the higher and better goals, and that’s just what I will do” KingK.Rool then walks out the door very slowly, and shuts the door too!

End of Chapter

Chapter 2, Part 1: A murder in the coming:

We look into the future, 5 weeks from the last chapter, and some big news has happened during the 5 weeks. Spadefox sits down in his home, and the time is 5:00 in the afternoon. He lazily sits down in the chair and puts the T.V on, and the news is on. The camera zooms close to the TV, and the two reporters come on, the first reporter says “hello, I’m Sonic the Baron” and the second reporter says “And I’m Darkserenade”. Sonic the Baron continues “Important news, there have been 2 murders this week, Smashbrosmike was brutally murdered in Tankra Station, and GenericTakoKid got murdered in GoldBro Street. What’s astounding is, is that Smashbromike finger prints were on a knife, and GenericTakoKid finger prints were on a belt which was found at the scene of the crime. But the 2 people were found at different locations, meaning there must be a mastermind behind this. We don’t know who, but there must be somebody else out there, needing to be taken to justice!” Spadefoxes room mate, Lenus Altair, looks at Spadefox, and says “GenericTakoKid was a good pal of mine, he didn’t deserve to get murdered, he was a great pal to me, and no one deserves to be murdered!” which Spadefox replies to “Yeah, but these 2 people were insanely annoying to me and to the majority! Us Primids tried to help Smashbromike, but he was stupid enough to forget our advice, and wander out somewhere dodgy.” Lenus Altair replies to Spadefox “But still, why would anyone kill these people? They were harmless!” which Spadefox mutters “And why would anyone scoop so low, I mean, no one liked those two anyway” Lenus Altair then asks Spadefox “Who would do such a thing” which he replies with “I don’t have prove or anything, but I think it could be someone..” which Lenus interrupts “Who?” and Spadefox stares into Lenus’s eyes, and answers “MasterWarlord” which startles Lenus, which he replies with “Th…the sandbag?”. Spadefox sands up, walking around the room a bit, and says “It wouldn’t be the first time a sandbag hurt someone so violently, as there was a war between us Primids and them remember?” Lenus Altair, looks down on the floor, and replies “Yes, maybe we should approach this sandbag; maybe it’s going to be the start of something… nasty”
MasterWarlord is in his room, just happen to be watching the news and goes to himself while pacing round the room at a quick pace “Smashbromike? GenericTakoKid? Those should be victims of ME! Nobody liked them. They were a waste of space. Smashbromike… he would’ve been my most tortured victim going, I remember when I was once young, as a Primid, I gave him the best tips in life, and he could’ve had potential to become a Saturn at least, but no, the ignorant sod didn’t take mine, or in fact anyone advice, to become a stronger and wiser man, but he was a fool, and he should’ve known what was coming to him! Who wanted to brutally murder him more than ME! Bah. I wonder which person would do such an evil but amazing thing… other than me?” MasterWarlord paces out of his room, and slams the door shut hard!

Chapter 2, Part 2: Spadefox faces MasterWarlord:

Spadefox and Lenus Altair are on their way to the Sandbags Castle, it’s quite a long road, with lifeless trees, and the sky’s dark, and it’s about 6:00 with the full moon up. As Spadefox approaches the giant building, Lenus is looking round while Spadefox has one thing on his mind. As they stand 10 yards from the massive building, Lenus goes to Spadefox “So, you know your way round?” Which he replies to “I’ve been here on numerous occasions, I think I should know my way round” As the pair approach the castle door, a big soldier in silver armour stands before them, The camera looks to the soldier, and it’s the Saturn named TWILTHERO. TWILT sticks his hand out in front of the 2, and says “Halt your movement, this area to you Primids are out of bounds, turn around” Which Spadefox replies back with “We’ve come here to talk to the Master Sandbag” Which TWILT answers back “I’ll ask MasterWarlord if he wants to see you” The pair wait outside for a few moments, and then TWILTHERO says “He can talk to you now” They walk into an empty corridor, which looks like it has expensive objects on little tables. Spadefox points to a room, ad they walk a knock on the door. MasterWarlord opens the door, and he goes and sits in a chair. MasterWarlord says in a dark voice “I know what you have heard and seen, Spadefox” Which he replies to “Yes, I guessed you should know about it, after all, you are capable of doing such deeds” MasterWarlord looks at Spadefox, giving the evils, and speaks out “You should never make assumptions, Spade. You do know a being can change its behaviour and attitude you know.” Spadefox, looking at him goes “Heh, you trying to put a wool over my eyes by claiming that you didn’t kill 2 innocent people, I know what your like, Warlord, leopards don’t change their spots you know, I’m not falling into this, Warlord.” MasterWarlord, shaking his head, stands up and starts pacing around the room, goes “I knew you was going to mention about the news as soon as TWILTHERO spoke your name” Spadefox interrupts and goes “Saying I’m predictable now?” MasterWarlord replies with “I do remember what I was like! Anyway, I would love to know who is behind it, I’ve been wondering about this for quite a while; I don’t know anyone who would do such a thing” Spadefox looks at him and replies “That’s one of the reasons I came to ask you” MasterWarlord looks at Spadefox, and looks at him with a half smile “Well, you are certainly brave going here, things could’ve went dirty if I was the culprit, so you get respect for that. I think it should be time for you two people to go back home, don’cha agree?” Spadefox looks at the ground and then looks up as TWILTHERO comes into the room, and bursts out “Obey the sandbags wishes, you 2 should leave now” Spadefox and Lenus stand up, and walk out of the room, and Lenus turns to Spadefox, and asks “Do you think his telling the truth” which Spadefox replies “Well it sound like he was wondering who could’ve done it, besides, I would’ve though MasterWarlord would take out a stronger character first, like me or you, maybe he was telling the truth this time round. We look at the pair from behind, and as they shut the door behind them, the camera fades.

Chapter 2, Part 3: Preparing to have a dinner with the old leaders:

We can see Sirkibble having a shower (We don’t see anything, preventing perverts from getting happy) and he’s minding his own business, until we hear a knock on the bathroom door, Sirkibble shouts “Bog off, I’m having shower” then we hear another knock before hearing “Can I ask something?” which Kibble replies back with “Let me get dry man”. We look behind the door, but in front of the person, and Sirkibble comes out with a towel wrapped around him, and he looks at the person and says “oh yeah there Blitzkreig” Commander looks at him “Can I take this day off?” Which Sirkibble replies back “What for?” the commander gets out his mobile phone and says “You know the previous leaders of this world right?” Kibble replies back with “Yeeaahh” Blitzkreig finishes with “Greatclaymonkey has planned a dinner for all the old leaders in the world, which includes me and Fawriel, I was wondering if I can go?” Kibble returns back with “And I’m not invited? Bah” which the commander looks back and says “I guess you can come along, you know what, bring the other sandbags along to, I’ll just ask”. The commander starts to phone up Greatclaymonkey, and he goes into a different room, Kibble is standing there, dapping the towel around his body. Commander goes out of the room and we can hear “We will meet you there, thank you for inviting us” and he closes his mobile phone. Sirkibble goes “Well…?” which Blitzkreig answers back “Yes you and the sandbags are. The dinner is at 6:00 pm, we got plenty of time to spare.” We go straight to 5:00 pm, and we can see Sirkibble lined up all the Saturns, and we hear “Now, since us Sandbags are leaving this place, we expect you lot to protect this place at all costs, I’m putting Dancingfrogman and Iron Thorn on guarding duties” Iron Thorn looks at Dancingfrogman, and we can see Iron Thorn look towards the floor, and mutters “for **** sake” while Junahu looks at DFM with an threatening face on and says “Don’t try it on, or else I’ll break you face, she’s MY bird, we don’t need a repeat like we did a couple of weeks ago now” Dancingfrogman gulps and doesn’t say a thing a looks towards the ground. We then can hear Sirkibble going “Right, you can have food from the fridge and freezer, but no one touches the giant chocolate cake” We can see the Saturns going “Aww man” and stomping on the floor. Sirkibble laughs as Chief Mendez comes in a goes “It’s time to leave now Kibble” which he replies to the Saturns “Remember you roles guys and gals” Sirkibble and Mendez walks off, and Iron Thorn and Dancingfrogman go in one direction, while all the other Saturns walk off in a different direction.

Chapter 2, Part 4: The dinner

We see Iron Thorn and Dancingfrogman in front of the large Sandbag palace, they are looking away from each other, and DFM is tapping on the floor out of boredom and impatience. Out of nowhere, Frogman just bursts out “Why is Junahu so gay towards me?” Iron Thorn turns towards Dancingfrogman and answers back “Well I wonder why?” DFM looks back at IT, and replies back “But your like a magnet, opposites attract, and I think I would be perfect for you” IT, answers back in a sarcastic tone “Oh, so your advice to me is that I would like you, HA, you should look in the mirror someday” Dancingfrogman replies back “He isn’t much of a looker himself you know, you deserve better” Iron Thorn, getting more and more frustrated, decides to walk away, Dancingfrogman runs an grabs hold off her from behind, but accidentally gropes her breasts, and replies with “Oooo, nice breasts – ” Iron Thorn gets out of his grip, and slaps him harshly to the ground, and says before running very loud “Get lost you creep”. We cut to Greatclaymonkeys mansion, and we see Fawriel, Greatclaymonkey, Sirkibble and the sandbags sitting down at the table, and we see everyone is just about to sit down. Fawriel, the first leader of the world, turns to Sirkibble, “Commander Blitzkreig made a great decision on electing you o be the leader of the world, you certainly have what it takes, you seem to be looking over the world much better than I first did” We see MasterWarlords ears twitch, and we’ve his half smile going down. Sirkibble returns “wow, thanks very much, I will try and continue to impress you, sir” Fawriel returns “It surely is, but I’ve heard that there is an insane guy is on a killing spree, have you thought of a plan yet, Kibble?” Sirkibble looks towards the floor and says “well, I actually – ” GCM interrupts and says “While this discussion has been interesting, I think it’s about time we have something to eat now, ay?” Everyone looks at each other before nodding at GCM. Claymonkey carries on “Okay, servants, bring on the buffet” We see many old MYMers (from MYM1) enter the room at this point, people like Metalord, Kirby D.B, El Duderino, Copperpot and RWB enter the room with various meat, vegetables and sauces. Chief Mendez’s eyes grow big, and have his Iris replaced with a turkey. Everyone scoffs the food down as the old MYMers walk out of the room in unison. In the distance a head of the Sandbags palace, we can see Spadefox, Smashbot226, Agidius and Lenus Altair walking towards the palace door, Spadefox asks the other Primids “We know what we have to do, people?” The Primids nod their heads at Spadefox, and as they approach the door, they can see Dancingfrogman getting up from that nasty slap IT gave him, they ask him “can we enter please?” DFM gets up and foolishly says “okay, okay, I’m going to get a right bollocking, so I don’t give a ****” DFM staggers up, and enters the pin to the door, and lets the group of Primids through.

Chapter 2, Part 5: Desert at the house

Spadefox instructs orders to the other primids, pointing to various routes and rooms. Spadefox goes into Chief Mendez’s room, and he starts looking around the draws and cupboards, and says to himself “I bet that the person, most likely a sandbag, wouldn’t leave the CCTV footage where it should be, they most likely have it – ” Spadefoxes mobile phones goes off, and it’s Agidius saying “There’s a broken video cassette here in Sirkibbles room, for some reason is was in some dog food for some reason? I think you should come here” Spadefox closes his mobile phone, and runs out of the room. We look into Lenus Altair, looking around in MasterWarlords room, and then Junahu looks into the room as the doors wide open, he looks in and sees Lenus shuffling around in MasterWarlords draws. Junahu gets shocked and says “What you doing here, you mean’t to be out, doing your corner shop work right?” Lenus replies, also stuttering “Well.. ummm… ahhh… Dancingfrogman let us in” Junahu, clenches his fist and mutters “That ******* is getting it now” Lenus then has a look that he’s thinking about something, possibly wondering what DFM did. We then cut to the Sandbags dinner party thing, and the Sandbags stuff into a chocolate cake, and Chris Lionheart says “wow, you’ve treated us like gods Fawriel, do you always have this standard of food?” and Fawriel replies “Yes, I’ve trained my guys well, don’t you have this level at food at home?” Lionheart says “Well, yeah, but not as good as this. I mean, Hyper_Ridley isn’t that good off a cook, so we tend on making Iron Thorn and Junahu do it, although dinner has been coming later these days, I wonder what they do in there.” GCM looks at Lionheart and says “Oh I see”. Chief Mendez, gets out of his chair, and starts jumping up and down and says “Excuse me, but I have to go”, Chief Mendez rushes to the toilet, and sees Metalord open the door to the toilet, Mendez says in a higher pitch than normal “Thank you”. We go back to see how Dancingfrogman is doing, and it’s not good! Dancingfrogman is getting screwed at by the rest of the Sandbags, Junahu shouts at DFM “You do know what will happen to us when the Sandbags come back, not only have you been looking at my gal, but now THIS, I can sense you being demoted now!” DFM looks around, looking sad, but then says “ummm, shouldn’t we catch those invaders?” The Saturns look dumbstruck, and then they shout “Get THEM!” We then cut to the Primids, who escaped minutes before, and Smashbot226 says “This is the evidence we need, now we need to fix the video cassette, what are we going to do?” Agidius looks up at the other Primids, and says “I know someone”, the other Primids say in unison “YYeaahhh? Who?” Agidius replies “TheSundanceKid, he can repair tons, I bet he can fix this tape” Lenus then asks “Where do we have to go?”, which Agidius replies “It’s on Chillzmemes Lane”. The gang start walking in a different direction, heading to their location.
 
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phatcat203 said:
OK then, here it is:


BORED OF HFIL, THE DEMON KING PICCOLO HAS JOINED THE CLASH!

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Since this was ignored, I'll say something about it.

Looking good there! I skimmed carefully and saw some pretty cool and unique mechanics, like Piccolo's float and shield. I'm not really sure what the point of the weighted cape is. Is it just there to change Piccolo's weight? That's pretty unique, I suppose. The specials seem alright too, even though half of them are projectiles. Good first moveset, and I'm sure someone else will jump in and give it a better critique than I can. You did a good job capturing Piccolo's character though!
 
KingK.Rool

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Piccolo is a great effort for a newcomer.

As for the moveset list, um... I updated it about a week or two ago, and then Kibble said he'd do it next. His fault! Not mine!
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Truth is, without Mendez, there's no one with the willpower to go through that many pages so regularly. If any of you guys want to help us out with this... Even listing the recent movesets and their creator would be a huge help.

And yeah, everyone's at the chat now, but we should all get bored of it soon enough and come crawling back here. :bee:
 
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@phatcat203: Very good, that's your first moveset? The D tilt seems a little generic, but it isn't really a big problem. You have a play style section, which is great. You have animations, detailed and somewhat creative specials. His float thing is awesome, this is a great first moveset.
 
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