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can you critque my ike

PentaSalia

Smash Master
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For the first video

Your smash game is pretty good
nice spikes

but you need more jab canceling,a lot of it D:
countering is fine,but you did it too much,it becomes predictable
do it for obvious attacks
offstage forward airs would have killed that ganon on the second stock

I wouldn't really suggest doing Quickdraws on the stage,if they block it
you're pretty much open.

Overall you simply need to do more jabs/jab canceling
:)
 

Nidtendofreak

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TheNiddo
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Oh boy....

First Match:

0:06: NEVER USE QD TO ATTACK. EVER. Unless it's to punish a missed tech. THAT IS IT.
0:10: Terrible spacing of fair
0:15: QD got you punished.
0:20: What is with the random Counter in the middle of nowhere?
0:22 Bad fair spacing got you punished again.
0:25: Why QD?
0:32: I would have said bad QD, but it actually turned out alright for that time amazingly enough.
0:37: Terrible attempt at Dtilt. You swung as he climbed up? You could have dair spiked him. Heck, even a walk off fair would of gotten the job done.
0:46: Random Counter
0:48: WHY QD?
0:51: Random empty double jumps to ftilt the wrong way = very bad. You should have gotten nailed for that.
0:53: Did you think Bair had Fair's range or something like that?
1:03-1:06: Random Counter, bad spacing of fair, QD YET A FREAKING AGAIN?
1:23: WHY QD?
1:30: Why random counter?
1:33: Why did you finish your jab combo while facing the wrong why? Heck, why on earth did you take this long to use jab? It should be your most used attack BY FAR, except for maybe fair in certain matchups.
1:37: WHY RANDOM COUNTER?
1:55: Terrible spacing of fair.
2:00: WHY FLIPPING QD?!?!?

That ganon played a whole lot better then you did. You barely used jab, only ever saw one jab cancel, and....
WAAAAAAAAAY TO MUCH FREAKING QD AND COUNTER!!!

Have I stressed that enough?

Next video you put up: don't use QD or Counter the entire match.
 

Nelo Vergil

Smash Master
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Feb 16, 2008
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For the first video

Your smash game is pretty good
nice spikes

but you need more jab canceling,a lot of it D:
countering is fine,but you did it too much,it becomes predictable
do it for obvious attacks
offstage forward airs would have killed that ganon on the second stock

I wouldn't really suggest doing Quickdraws on the stage,if they block it
you're pretty much open.

Overall you simply need to do more jabs/jab canceling
:)
You got pretty much everything, one huge thing though was alot of your spacing was awful, u were right in his face causing u to get punished. Also concerning jabbing, if you missed one part of it and they escape it (like how dorf was behind u) dont finish the combo.
 

bang19

Smash Cadet
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Jan 21, 2009
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miami
thx 4 the critique everyone ill try 2 work on everything and post more vids in a couple weeks...
 
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