TheLifeRuiner
Smash Lord
I'm not good, but i'm still going to tell you what i hate and what i think
1st match
-You come down with aerials a lot. Out of ~25 times that you came down with aerials (this includes jumping and doing an aerial as you come down), you only really benfitted TWICE that i could see. Most of the time you were punished for it.
-The one grab you did was OBVIOUS
-Shield dropping. I saw none. Baiting with shield dropping is too good
-One of your stocks, he came back and you ran to the edge. You lost that stock. I THINK it would have been better to run around the stage/platforms. It's safest not to cede center stage. I know samus ***** on the edge with the fair and the regrabs, but yeah.
2nd match
-The one grab you did was OBVIOUS
3rd match
-aerials again
You're doing pretty much the same stuff throughout the other matches so I'm just going to stop.
Also I would recommend that if you do work on any of them, ONLY work on one or two of them at a time so that you get them down perfect.
Remember I SUCK though lol. However, this is stuff that's been pointed out to me by people hella better than me haha and i've seen improvement.
that's about all i have
otherwise you **** and i envy your skill
1st match
-You come down with aerials a lot. Out of ~25 times that you came down with aerials (this includes jumping and doing an aerial as you come down), you only really benfitted TWICE that i could see. Most of the time you were punished for it.
-The one grab you did was OBVIOUS
-Shield dropping. I saw none. Baiting with shield dropping is too good
-One of your stocks, he came back and you ran to the edge. You lost that stock. I THINK it would have been better to run around the stage/platforms. It's safest not to cede center stage. I know samus ***** on the edge with the fair and the regrabs, but yeah.
2nd match
-The one grab you did was OBVIOUS
3rd match
-aerials again
You're doing pretty much the same stuff throughout the other matches so I'm just going to stop.
Also I would recommend that if you do work on any of them, ONLY work on one or two of them at a time so that you get them down perfect.
Remember I SUCK though lol. However, this is stuff that's been pointed out to me by people hella better than me haha and i've seen improvement.
that's about all i have
otherwise you **** and i envy your skill