Well Matt I just finished reading your piece.
I think I might have missed something as to how the 2 stories connected, but I'll figure it out. As far as comments go, I gotta say the first images I got where something like Van Wilder meets Orange County or American Pie meets Cheaters, I don't know.
Anyway, I really enjoyed the conversation with JP and Babul, which is probably where I get my Van Wilder reference from. It seemed like a lot of conversations I've had with drunk friends and strangers, and of course being drunk myself. I have to admit, at first, I thought this was going to be some dumb thing about getting drunk leading into an alcohol posioning incident, but thank god it was far from that.
There were a couple of spots where I was iffy with your word choice and descriptions, but I felt your descriptions regarding the frat house and party were good. I have to say that overall the story wasn't super exciting for me, it did make me laugh and take me back to times of me being a drunken mess, so I liked it in that regard.
Nice work Matt.
