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Make Your Move 4 : Tubaam's Story Mode : Chaos Over Evil

The Trophy Master

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Prologue : Red Eyes Paper

Cinematic 1 : Under Bleck's Control

The prologue takes place here, in this dark room lighted up only by 1 torch. Dozens and dozens of beasts and monsters are talking loudly, however, we don't see them because of the darkness. The only one we can see seems to be their master, which always tries to talk but there's too much noise. He starts to be angry and put his magic staff high in the air. All beasts look at it.

COUNT BLECK

A red aura starts glowing around Bleck's staff and lets go a red power wave and it stops glowing. But you can see a hundred eyes starting to glow red and they all stopped talking. Bleck was pleased. Then he said : " You, minions from the Subspace, anicently controlled by your old and weak master, Tabuu, will now be under Count Bleck's control. They all approved. Count Bleck put his staff once again in the air, now with purple sqares and circles spinning around it. He pointed it ni the Subspace Minions direction and a big black and purple portal appeared in front of them. They started entering it. Count Bleck started laughing loudly and the screen faded and turned black....


Chapter 1 : All Around The Worlds



Level 1 : The Link Between These Cards

Cinematic 2 : Future Pharaoh

We see the land of Hyrule, in a forest, nobody in it. But then, you can see a blue light ball appearing in the middle of it. It transforms into a human shape and starts becoming human. A young man is then revealed, with strange hairs and a silver machine full of cards attached to his arm. This is....

YUGI MOTO

The machine is a Duel Disk, holding all of Yugi's cards. He used his Granpa's teleportation device to come here, in this new world. He hears someone coming and looks between the trees. Another young man is coming, wearing green clothes and a green hat.

LINK

Yugi challenges him to duel and he accepts. Beside taking out a Duel Disk, he takes out a sword and a shield. Yugi is surprised but still wanna fight. Link thinks that is an enemy coming from other lands and wanna stop him. Yugi then says : " Let's get it on! " and smiles.


Battle 1 : Swords and Cards
Play as : Yugi Moto
Play against : Link
Details : This is a stamina battle. The enemy got 100HP and you 200HP.

Music - Hyrule Field - Twilight Princess



You can see the Dark Magician knocking Link back. Then Yugi puts a green ( Spell ) card in his Duel Disk and says : " Here is a card I got from one of my enemies, here is Toon World! "Beside turning all livings and objects in Toons, his Duel Disk starts glowing green. A green beam is released on Link, but doesn't knock him down, it doesn't do any effect. But a clone of him then appears to his side but is strange. He has a big, large head and is really little.

TOON LINK

Seeing his cards aren't working well in this new world, Yugi teleports back to his world. Link and Toon Link are staring at each other, but then each of them get their sword out! You can see an angry look on both of their face and they each step back of a dozen of steps. Then they start running to each other, swords ready to hit. Just before they hit each other, the camera stops.


Battle 2 : The Toon Side Of Link
Play as : Link or Toon Link
Play against : Toon Link or Link
Details : A basic battle, 1 stock for CPU and 2 stocks for you.

Music - Ocarina of Time Medley - TLoZ OoT



They're sword to sword, after an equal battle. They stopped fighting. They throwed their swords away, smiled to each other and shaked hands. They now decided to work together to destroy all future Hyrule invaders....screen turns black..

LEVEL COMPLETE!


Level 2 : The Young One, The Old Man And The Pokemon

Cinematic 3 : Your First Pokemon Battle

You can see a young man walking, going to the forest entrance. While walking, he hears sound coming from the forest. The young boy takes a Pokeball out of his bag and it grows bigger fastly. You see the boy's face.

POKEMON TRAINER

The noise coming from the trees was made by a man, an old man. He got white hairs and a white beard. He's also wearing a coat. He smiles when seeing Pokemon Trainer. The young boy recognizes him, it's..

PROF. ROWAN

Pokemon Trainer is his biggest fan and asks him for a battle, which he accepts. Rowan is pleased to see there's still young people with interest into Pokemons. Pokemon Trainer throws a Pokeball to the floor, revealing Charizard, the dragon Pokemon. Rowan throws one too but the camera stops before it hits the ground.


Battle 3 : I choose you, Charizard!
Play as : Pokemon Trainer ( Charizard Only )
Play against : Prof. Rowan
Details : 1-Stock match, stage is plain without any holes and doesn't have any platforms.

Music - Rival Battle - Pokemon Diamond/Pearl



You can see Charizard shooting a fireball at Rowan's Magmortar sending him back. Rowan gets him back into his Pokeball so he cannot be attacked anymore. Rowan smiles, and tells to the Pokemon Trainer to come with him in the woods, to go to his lab in Sandgem City. The young boy accepts and is really happy.


Side-Scrolling Stage 1 : The Forest To Sandgem City
Play as : Pokemon Trainer, Prof. Rowan
Objective : Get through the forest
Details : You can ecounter two types of Pokemons in the forest : Starly and Bidoof. Starly will be flying in the sky and diving to you, if he gets you it's 5% damage and low knockback. Bidoof will instead run to you and bite you, for 7% damage and Mid-Low Knockback. This level is easy.

Music - Route 225 - Pokemon Diamond/Pearl



You can see them walking out of the forest, calmly. When they get to see Sandgem City, they can see something horrible. The town is in fire, only the lab is ok, but protected by Galactic Team Grunts, like those who are patrolling around. They see Rowan and PT, and they got red glowing eyes. One of them thwors a Pokeball to the ground, revealing a Skuntank, which also has red eyes. Screen turns black......

LEVEL COMPLETE!!


Level 3 : A Trip To Dry Dry Desert

Cinematic 4 : Walking In Sand

You're in a really dry desert, almost nobody can be seen beside some Goombas and Mouses. A man wearing red clothes can be seen, he also has a big black mustache. He looks really exhausted and thirsty.

MARIO

At his side there is a young woman, with a pink dress and an umbrella. She also looks really thirsty. She still tries to stay straight and beautiful.

PEACH



Side-Scrolling Stage 2 : Buzzy Beetles and Pokey Sprouts
Play as : Peach, Mario
Objective : Get near the town
Details : This level looks a lot like the Mushroomy Kingdom but looks more like Dry Dry Desert and is harder. You can find 2 enemies : Buzzy Beetles and Pokey Sprouts. Pokey Sprouts are like Pokey heads, but instead having spikes, it's a big flower. They also have only one attack, a roll attack. They'll start spinning and go straight on you, causing 8% damage with Mid-Low Knockback. Buzzy Beetles have the same movements than Koopa Troopas, but their on four legs, are smaller and need 2 jumps to get in their shell. They also have the same attack as Pokey Sprouts.

Music - Dry Dry Desert Trek - Paper Mario



The ground start shaking strangely. Some trees fall on the ground and the Goombas flee fastly. Mario and Peach look at each other, not been so sure of what to do. Mario gets in front of Peach to protect her. A lot of sand pops out the ground and a big man with a beard is coming out as well. He looks angry and is in, paper?

O'CHUNKS


Battle 4 : Chunking Sand
Play as : Mario, Peach
Play against : O'Chunks
Details : This is a stamina battle. He got 200 HP while you have 100HP, three lives. ( Counting starting character ) O'Chunks is 1.5 times stronger than usual.

Music - O'Chunks Battle - Super Paper Mario



O'Chunks looks dizzy and scared of Mario. Then a red aura starts glowing around him. His eyes also turn red. Then he turns angry! He gets ready for a second fight and grows two times bigger.


Battle 5 : O'Chunks Final Battle
Play as : Mario, Peach
Play against : O'Chunks ( With red eyes and a red aura around him )
Details : Same rules as last battle, but this time he got 300HP. He is two times bigger and is two times stronger than last fight.

Music - Cortez Battle - Paper Mario TTYD



You can see Mario jumping and punching the giant O'Chunks knocking him on the ground. His eyes turn normal back and the aura disappear, he looks dizzy. A purple and black portal appears behind him and he is sucked in the swirling teleporting magic vortex. Mario and Peach look at each other and start walking back to the train leading to the Mushroom Kingdom.


LEVEL COMPLETE!


Level 4 : The Trophy Tournament

Cinematic 5 : Entering the Arena

The camera is in The Stadium with a lot of people looking at the empty middle of the arena. Then you can hear a voice which only does little noises which you cannot understand. But then, in each side of the arena, a giant silver gate opens, smoke coming out of the doors. You can see a dog coming in the middle of the arena, looking like he's waiting someone. But then, a young boy comes to his side running like a dog. They take a fighting pose.

KIBA & AKAMARU

Nobody is coming yet from the second door but then, you can hear a hysterical laugh coming from it. A man comes out of it. He has a fur coat and got big muscles. He throws his coat away and gets in a fighting pose.

RYUJI YAMAZAKI


Battle 6 : Round 1, Fight!
Play as : Ryuji Yamazaki OR Kiba & Akamaru
Play against : Kiba & Akamaru OR Ryuji Yamazaki
Details : 150 HP stamina match, 2 lives.

Music - Ryuji Yamazaki Theme - Fatal Fury



You can see Kiba trying to punch Ryuji, but he blocks the hit and punches many times the young boy. Then he uppercuts him in the air, and kicks him back. Kiba stays on the floor. Ryuji Yamazaki wins! Kiba becomes a trophy and is taken away by Subspace Bugs. Ryuji walks out the arena by the door he came from. The crowd applauses and the screen turns black.


LEVEL COMPLETE!

CHAPTER COMPLETE!
 

Smady

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Interesting use of Bleck as the main villain, I'll be interested to see how you continue this. :)

But put it through spell check for the grammar first - always describe what you are talking about specifically using nouns or it becomes confusing, like the first sentence or the one concerning the 'master', it was unclear both of these times.
 

Baloo

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It looks good so far, It would be cool if you put Mimi in, then all of the SPM antagonists would be in. Of course, I have enough representatives in this as it is...:laugh:
 

MasterWarlord

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Indeed, Bleck being the main villain is an interesting turn of events.

But that means that Dimentio will automatically become the main villain by betraying him.:laugh:

I agree that Mimi should be added seeing Bleck is the main villain and it'd give you all the main SPM atagonists.

This is looking decent enough so far, although as Smash Daddy said, the grammar could be improved.:dizzy:

Although it's not as bad as some other SMs. . .
 

flyinfilipino

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Oh my gosh it's Yugi Moto!

(Why would he challenge Link to a duel?) (Also, "Let's get it on?" :p)

And then he turned Link into Toon Link which I thought was funny. But is that all he's going to do?

Good work, sir.
 
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