Recent content by Mr.Lombardi34

I'd be interested

I thought that was the old venue though...

Where IS the new venue? I don't see it in the original post anywhere

Well, Anthony Song is just a sexy guy to have for an avatar

Thanks a lot for the feedback! I was really debating whether or not to include that intro and I think I may take it out once I put up part 2.

Haha thanks man.

Maybe you should write your own excellent piece and show me how it's done. I'm sure that would turn out great.

It's been a while, but I s'pose I'll leave some feedback... First of all, check your grammar over a few times. Read your piece over a few times on different occasions and you'll easily weed out all mistakes. I noticed that you sometimes switched from present to past tense mainly. I like the...

This is the first part of a story I've been working on recently. I had originally written one a long time ago, and when I found it I decided to rewrite it completely and borrow certain elements. Enjoy, and please leave some feedback. It would be greatly appreciated! The island of...

This would definitely make a good song. I think we can all relate to your lyrics.

There are... it doesn't flow at all. I'll keep using there's incorrectly, thank you.

I can't imagine doing it consistently for every post -Mr.Lombardi

No soup for you

That's been inactive for ages now. There's no use :/

You pick a door. There are two doors left. There's a 2/3 chance that one of the other two contains the car. One of the other two is eliminated, therefor the remaining one has a 2/3 chance of winning while the one you picked only has 1/3. ...Just switch, you don't have to understand it