Which one is better? First off is mine:
Unexpected visitors
A knock at the door
A pound at the wall
A tap on the window
And my mother was gone
A scream on the street
A shout on the road
A scrape on the pavement
And my mother was gone
The roll of the trains
The cry of the babies
I had heard it all before
But this was all too loud
A tear drenched face
A half choked sob
A shattered heart
My mother was gone
And next is Gen's:
Antebellum
Hello.
It's cold.
It's very cold.
What?
Say that again..
Oh, a blanket?
No, no thanks...
I don't deserve a blanket.
Yes, I'm sure...
Your kind taught me that.
No, I am quite sure.
Besides, staying here makes me comfortable.
I don't know why...
It makes me stronger.
Stronger mentally for the immense load I have tomorrow.
What is it you ask?
Work for my master..
Work for my life.
What?
What did you say?
Take me home? To the north?
..Let's go.
Do you still have that blanket?
Unexpected visitors
A knock at the door
A pound at the wall
A tap on the window
And my mother was gone
A scream on the street
A shout on the road
A scrape on the pavement
And my mother was gone
The roll of the trains
The cry of the babies
I had heard it all before
But this was all too loud
A tear drenched face
A half choked sob
A shattered heart
My mother was gone
And next is Gen's:
Antebellum
Hello.
It's cold.
It's very cold.
What?
Say that again..
Oh, a blanket?
No, no thanks...
I don't deserve a blanket.
Yes, I'm sure...
Your kind taught me that.
No, I am quite sure.
Besides, staying here makes me comfortable.
I don't know why...
It makes me stronger.
Stronger mentally for the immense load I have tomorrow.
What is it you ask?
Work for my master..
Work for my life.
What?
What did you say?
Take me home? To the north?
..Let's go.
Do you still have that blanket?
