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Mario comics!

ndayday

stuck on a whole different plaaaanet
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Nice spriting, but Mario doesn't talk like himself...no mama mias...or anything like that! Good spriting though, and pretty good storyline aswell.
 

TheGenoFollower

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thanks guys, I really appreciate your opinions and yeah, I don't plan on making more anytime soon what with school and all but during summr break I MIGHT make more...........and maybe toss in some mama-mia's, we'll see ;)
 

plural

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try putting the words in the right order.

As in, you always read top to bottom.
 

TheGenoFollower

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I mean in, say, the first one. There are two quote "bubbles", but the one that makes sense being read first is below the other one....
OH! now I get it, I thought you were reffering to the latest one, like I said, this was when I was a noob spriter, the comics I will make now will now longer be confusing, or at least the least amount possible
 

Lv.99

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Nicely done, howver the text organization was a little confusing. Traditionally, comics are read left-right and up-down. So that threw me off. But overall, tis' beautiful.
 

TheGenoFollower

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Yeah, the text order IS confusing, but not to worry! trust me, from here on out, my comics will be in correct order! and I think I have a fan in Mr.Luigiman lol
 

TheGenoFollower

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I love that movie, that movie made playing the trumpet all the better, remember the joke "hey I play the trumpet! *moves three fingers a bit and then lifts the middle finger*"
 

MrLuigiman

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It was an awesome movie, (specially when the monkey crawled out of the guys butt.) and me 2 about the trumpet part. lol
 
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