my claus :)

[foxsmasher]

Please observe and critique my claus. Thank you.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=vNv3CDuKPbw




http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AIdXfLrVmyM

this one has a spot of lag..srry.

 

[Omis]

Im not the best lucas but seeing as how no one else feels like commenting I will
first video
-at .29 a pk thunder would have been much better
-.32-.36 you had to expect that pk fire
- .38 good approach
- 1.03 good pk thunder
- 1.12 good nair
- 1.35 perfect up smash
- both of you had some nice pk freeze
- amazing finisher


Overall I would use less up smashes they are too situational.
Also try to use more sh fair it a very good approach in my opinion.
Also try to use your pk magnet attack it has some surprising knockback.

In the end pretty good. But remeber I'm not that good so some of my feedback is probaly null.

 

[Omis]

Posted the critique of the second video in the second videos comment box.

 

[foxsmasher]

Ah ok. Thanks for the comments. I will incorporate the psi magnet more into my game no doubt and work on not up+smashing so much.Thanks again.

 

[gnuf]

yeah up smash is a bad habit. but i tell you what. its a secret that always work! well most of the time. sometime when trying to do a up smash finisher, do a little dash dance then upsmash them for the kill.

also another good habit you should learn is at low percentage, when you down throw hold up and do a up tilt. good for racking up dmg with that little extra attack!

 

[foxsmasher]

yeah up smash is a bad habit. but i tell you what. its a secret that always work! well most of the time. sometime when trying to do a up smash finisher, do a little dash dance then upsmash them for the kill.

also another good habit you should learn is at low percentage, when you down throw hold up and do a up tilt. good for racking up dmg with that little extra attack!

yea I kinda don't do that in dittos or fast chars. But yes I do know that "secret" lol. Thanks for the advice.

 

[Masque]

That's not Claus. That's Lucas with a red shirt.

 

[Dxt XXII]

Many times you would use an attack too far away from fox or miss and you would get punished. I think you need to work on your spacing a bit.

Nice U-Smash usage, it should have gotten fox really mad.

 

[foxsmasher]

Ok thank you Dxt. I will indeed work on my spacing allot more. I do see that I miss some of my moves.

 

[Uuby]

On the bottom of your Television screen when you're brawling someone it saids Lucas not Claus

Quoted for Truth

 

[foxsmasher]

Oh my. I thought it said claus sorry for that.