JJROCKETS
Smash Journeyman
- Joined
- Oct 13, 2008
- Messages
- 396
- Location
- Iowa City, IA / Chicago, IL
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- JJROCKETS
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- 5129-2280-4196
We need a video critique thread, just saying.
Not really sure if this deserves its own thread, or should be put in the video thread or the general thread, but I'll post it here and a mod can do whatever they want with it.
Anyways, this is my Ice Climbers. When critiquing, please do not mention "Work on your chain grabs!" or "Work on your DI!" or anything general like that. Yes, I am in fact aware that my chain grabs aren't perfect, that is why I practice, so just please don't post here saying nothing but to work on my chaingrabbing, that wont do me any good.
We aren't the greatest of smashers, and have never been to a real tournament (school tournaments don't count D: ) but I really want to start playing in real tournaments, so if you could please help me out a bit, and even tell me how well I would do at a tournament if I went to one I would really appriciate it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GD7XKQLkb2U Lylat Criuise
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nqJhJh47gRo Battlefield
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nn_iFgNVD7M Halberd
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B1qb9YehJIY Yoshi's Island (Brawl)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oQQErErDneQ Smashville
I don't expect you to watch all of them, but when commenting please let me know which videos you watched, so then I can watch them back and see what you are talking about.
Here is my general idea of what I need to do:
I feel that I roll too much.
I need to work on chaingrabs.
I need to work on DI.
I need to work on being less predictable.
I need to work on getting the KOs. (Sort of goes with being predictable)
I need to work on desynchs, but I generally don't desynch too much against Pikachu because he will mess it up with Thunderjolts, but maybe I need to try some other stuff with desyncs.
That is just my general opinion about my game right now, and I have honestly no idea how well I would do in a tournament, so help me out please
Thanks, JJ
Not really sure if this deserves its own thread, or should be put in the video thread or the general thread, but I'll post it here and a mod can do whatever they want with it.
Anyways, this is my Ice Climbers. When critiquing, please do not mention "Work on your chain grabs!" or "Work on your DI!" or anything general like that. Yes, I am in fact aware that my chain grabs aren't perfect, that is why I practice, so just please don't post here saying nothing but to work on my chaingrabbing, that wont do me any good.
We aren't the greatest of smashers, and have never been to a real tournament (school tournaments don't count D: ) but I really want to start playing in real tournaments, so if you could please help me out a bit, and even tell me how well I would do at a tournament if I went to one I would really appriciate it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GD7XKQLkb2U Lylat Criuise
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nqJhJh47gRo Battlefield
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nn_iFgNVD7M Halberd
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B1qb9YehJIY Yoshi's Island (Brawl)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oQQErErDneQ Smashville
I don't expect you to watch all of them, but when commenting please let me know which videos you watched, so then I can watch them back and see what you are talking about.
Here is my general idea of what I need to do:
I feel that I roll too much.
I need to work on chaingrabs.
I need to work on DI.
I need to work on being less predictable.
I need to work on getting the KOs. (Sort of goes with being predictable)
I need to work on desynchs, but I generally don't desynch too much against Pikachu because he will mess it up with Thunderjolts, but maybe I need to try some other stuff with desyncs.
That is just my general opinion about my game right now, and I have honestly no idea how well I would do in a tournament, so help me out please
Thanks, JJ
