TLMSheikant
Smash Master
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The marth boards have it like this and it works very well. I suggest you guys give it a shot.People need their own thread for video critiques.
Matchups idk. Theres an inquiry thread, but whatever.
i havent updated the critique thread in forever, i also hardly do critiques anymore. but im glad other people are doing them.It only works if the OP maintains the thread very well. Steel is like always on for at least an hour everyday.
yarly, you don't need to update it, lol. I made one in the Kirby boards a couple months ago, and it just got stickied two days ago, and I was like :Oi havent updated the critique thread in forever, i also hardly do critiques anymore. but im glad other people are doing them.
I know my TL game isn't great, but I never knew that I make so many mistakes O_O! Thanks man! I assure you, my Tl has improved since those last three matches since they aren't current (The TL ditto was on Friday, though). And I save my USmash more now ^_^! Plus, I annoy people with BAir to Bow cancel. So I will try to get a current match up here asap, but still, thanks for doing this for the community. I guess my friends saying that my TL is godly is not true, and I know it. Maybe I need to expose my TL game to better TL's so I can learn from them. Currently, I only know two TL's that are better than me, but I can never play themOni Wolf-
I saw all the matches and decided to not critique your Toon Link ditto. Ill point a lot of mistakes you do. So that u dont repeat them in a match ever again. This may seem harsh :S. Anyway, here I go:
The Pokemon Trainer vid-
0:10- Random Arrow on a platform when it wouldnt hit :S.
0:36- Random Fsmash.
1:03- You fail to hit him out of his pokemon change because u got desperate.
1:07- You usmashed after zair when Nair would be far better, save your kill moves.
1:21- You throw bomb and hurt yourself the pkmn trainer reacts to this and hits you with fair.
1:26- Random usmash.
1:30- Random dash attack. :S
1:37_1:40- Random zair, usmash and nair when they wouldnt hit. Dont do moves wildly and expect them to hit.
1:41- Random fsmash charge >_>.
1:46_1:48- Learn to DI.
1:50- Random fsmash again. Stop it plz. My eyes hurt.
2:26- Save your usmash for the kill please.
2:33- Usmash....again!
3:31- Random fair when it wouldnt hit.
3:41- Learn to DI.
Hmmm, U seem to be doing attacks wildly trying to connect. Please know when to use ur attacks. Also kill moves like usmash, fair, fsmash should be used either at the beginning of the battle or at the end of their stock to get the kill. At the beginning because u are certain u will land 10 more hits to refresh the move so it becomes as powerful again to get the kill. Moves decay and decrease their knockback and damage so using a kill move repeatedly will get u nowhere. K onto the Captain Falcon one-
CF vid-
0:28- Bad zair spacing. You get fsmashed.
1:18- You didnt sweetspot the ledge. When taking bombs out offstage always let go of the ledge downwards instead of sideways, while falling bomb pull, jump and upB.
1:22- Learn to arrow cancel correctly. Instant nair when jumping is the way to cancel the nair into an arrow.
1:45- Random grab.
1:55- Random grab again when ur opponent is on the ledge :S.
1:57- Bad boomerang against a better player that would be unsafe and get you severely punished.
I know its wifi but your Toon Link still needs a lot of work. Please stop the random attacks. Attack only when you know you will hit or most likely will. Also, stop grabbing so much with Tink. Better players will read the grab and punish you severely. Im not saying dont use grab but try to limit the amount of grabs you do. Dont be Lobos. Also, when you zair, usmash is a good followup and all but nair is the safest and doesnt decay your best kill move. So go with insta nair when u land a zair and to mix it up: grab sometimes after the zair when they least expect it. Overall, your Toon Link needs a lot of work but keep working and improving and dont be discouraged by this critique. On the contrary, Im telling you this stuff so that you can improve and become a better player. Have a nice day.
PS- People Im not the only one allowed to do indeph critiques if you want to, just do it. Also, shadepaw if no one has critiqued you until tomorrow, I got you.
Thanks dude. ^^ I reckon I'm gonna get a lot more than that, so I'm happy for the help!
Also, shadepaw if no one has critiqued you until tomorrow, I got you.
Yeah, sorry, sorry.I gladly accept any criticisms (I roll too much, noted) but may I ask you give advice while you do so, so I can improve? I may roll too much, but what do I do instead? You understand what I mean?
Seemed you did good job critiquing yourself lol, anyways you did spam usmash which is a no no. You did a good job of not getting hit by g&w fsmash on the edge. Use less charged arrows and more cancel arrows.The GnW match was a tourney match. I get nervous during tournies and make some dumb mistakes. I know there was an isntance I spammed 4 Usmashes for some reason. I use dair a few too many times (occassionally on accident), and I used Fsmash once or twice when I shouldn't have. I like to try and mind game with it by doing the first part of fsmash.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NA0b38TTwe8&feature=channel
Basically your just lacking shorthops. You need to use a lot more aerials like zair, nair, bair, zair....and zair. And the stuff that Lobos said.Following videos are vs a snake and a GnW.
The snake video was a friendly. I was explaoring Snake having never actually played a Snake before. He is definitely not the best snake in the world and I sd'd my self at 28% while trying and failing horribly at something
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dbCrgqkiYFc&feature=channel_page
The GnW match was a tourney match. I get nervous during tournies and make some dumb mistakes. I know there was an isntance I spammed 4 Usmashes for some reason. I use dair a few too many times (occassionally on accident), and I used Fsmash once or twice when I shouldn't have. I like to try and mind game with it by doing the first part of fsmash.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NA0b38TTwe8&feature=channel
People expect marth's to fair, falco's to chain grab, snake's to uptilt. But they still do it xDAs for zair, I don't use it a whole lot because the people I play against anyways predict it and shield it a lot. So I use it sparingly to catch them off guard. It also allows me to pull off the zair to nair combo. I don't use zair with a bomb in hand much because it telegraphs that a zair or bomb throw is coming and they shield it.
But zair is something I am gradually getting the hang of but people like Dazwa, Toil, Darc etc have been difficult to pull of zair "combos" on. I may just not be quick enough. They are not strangers to Toon Link so they expect this stuff.
This is true, but their moves are not quite so telegraphed and easy to shield. That is why I use it sparingly to catch them off guard. But like I said I continue to practice it and make it a part of my game. But I don't agree with being zair crazy like some people suggest. I've tried it and I just get a power shielded zair and punishment. But I do agree I definitely could use it more and better. I just need some more practice with it. I literally get to play people twice a month MAYBE.People expect marth's to fair, falco's to chain grab, snake's to uptilt. But they still do it xD