Vlade
I intentionally have minute marks for some without minute marks for others. I felt like being more selective the more I saw
(WF, G2)
Got baited super hard on your grabs LOL, be more patient
I see that you're trying to work a very random close combat game when you think it's good to get in but you should only really do that once you've established control, i.e. random cross up rolls =! good unless you're already pressuring and forcing them to react
Stop nervously shielding/dodging. Shield/dodge should be used minimally
When you get a close range laser, don't always retreat. Close range lasers, when used intentionally, are a good gambit for a situation where you can get a grab or force a reaction. The gamble of course is that they will just grab you on landing or punish you by buffering actions between lasers but you keep retreating and letting off the pressure so he gets away w/ the same reaction everytime (shield) for free
Phantasm a little more conservatively, you seem to like to do it in reaction to everything but it should really be used as mix up. When he does something don't be afraid to just stand there, walk forward, or even bait him w/ empty short hop. Use it more when you see that he's trying to dash in
1:29 PLEASE PUNISH OPEN SHUTTLE LOOPS ON REACTION
Your grab setup seems to be single laser -> shield, walk toward grab to beat 2nd shield but he just spotdodges. Wait if you're going to use that set up. Personally I think that you should really think about incorporating more reads for grab if you want the grab so bad
1:38 what is this double laser bs, if he's up there and you're going to pressure him aerially you need to do it when he's higher above the ground and thus has to reduce his options if he wants to get away
1:42 WHY?
1:46 WHY?
Change up your DI but make sure to change your trajectory (i.e. don't DI down, then DI to the side, lol). If you're going to keep the same DI at least don't do the same thing twice in a row :/
You're eager to get onstage for some reason while recovering. Relax
Punished hard for being eager to kill lol, not necessarily for damage but for position. Stop it
2:01 this is what i'm talking about w/ the phantasm, don't just react to anything! be selective
2:07 onstage again?
2:15 hope you knew that was just a long shot LOL
2:21 onstage again
2:22 obvious back air. the first bair was a failure already, why do another one? i understand that it's one of those safe things - if he throws this out then it'll beat it + majority of his options won't cover this - but in the chance that he even picks the one option to punish you get hit not to mention he can count on you to do this again in the same position
2:35 again with this bad randomness, you haven't applied pressure yet so don't roll in
2:41- 2:42 Terrible series of actions, first you down air to land then you down air some retardedly safe pressure. You need to learn when to retreat
3:00 SIDE B
3:02 Nice, a new type of grab set up
3:04 Of course you would do the obvious thing! Just take the grab or retreat
3:14 lmao
3:34 THAT IS A WAYYYY BETTER PHANTASM THAN BEFORE
3:35
3:37-3:42 I think these rolls are just coming from a bad shield habit that you're showing here. Not shielding even when there's a potential threat is important in a lot of matchups, particularly the MK one. vs. MK you HAVE to be willing to take certain risks
3:45 proper punish is buffered dash attack OOS, if you wanna be safe buffer roll back
3:46 momentum cancelling at low percents got you into this mess
3:48 sad he didn't properly punish you for that down air, which already happened twice (2:41 and 3:14). I know you don't wanna full hop and put yourself in a bad position, but at this point it's not really a choice since he's banking on you letting your chip shield (and judging from the level of MK shown here I don't think Corpse is gonna react quickly enough to your fullhop to escape)
3:51 the fourth time you've down air'd descending when MK is one character length away horizontally
3:55 onstage
3:57 why the down airs? actually you seem to like them near plats lol
4:06 OHHHHHH okay now I get why you do the rolls. That's more of a reads thing though, you're not gonna get it randomly like you did here
4:10 don't like that empty short hop especially because you're highly likely to
4:12 yep likely to try and short hop again, get baited son
4:16 you waited the first time, and then you went onstage lol
You put yourself in good positions sometimes but for some reason you don't understand risk/reward very well vs MK...normally it's the other way around. Your technical game is okay and I like your occasional ftilts to condition him not to random dash but there are a LOOOT of things you need to work on that I've mostly outlined above. Gonna look at the other vids later if I feel like it
Anyway, thanks again!
