Jazzy Jinx
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Meh. I dug up a few poems around my room here and there. I got bored so I decided to share my "unbelievable works of literature" (joke) with you guys. So far, I only re-made one of them. I have to type the others up on word and then copy/paste them here before I can share them. Until then, tell me what you think of my poem style.
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Therein Lies Beauty
A tear rolls down my cheek,
I quench my soul.
The object of my desire,
Lost to distance.
An annoyance of my past,
In my business always.
The persistent mistress,
Longing for me, I oppose.
An abstract beauty,
I don’t see it.
Though it is not a stranger,
Lost from my thought.
A skin absent of lust,
I refuse her.
Though we bond,
Love is killed by appearance.
August, trees cry tears of colors,
It was when it happened.
Temptation occurs,
Lively, a single kiss.
And I realize,
Internally she is unrivaled.
Therein lies beauty,
Lasting always, untouched by time.
After while though,
I hear grim news.
The night veils,
Locked her fate.
As my eyes weaken,
In my soul, with it.
Torn from me,
Lost to distance.
And though gloomy,
I understand.
Time separates us,
Lily, reunited you and I, when I die.
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I didn't really like the last verse since it was longer than all the other ones but I wanted to stay true to my A-I-T-L pattern. And this is completely fictional, I don't know anyone named Lily. I just felt spontaneous one day. Well, tell me what you guys think and I may or may not listen.
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Therein Lies Beauty
A tear rolls down my cheek,
I quench my soul.
The object of my desire,
Lost to distance.
An annoyance of my past,
In my business always.
The persistent mistress,
Longing for me, I oppose.
An abstract beauty,
I don’t see it.
Though it is not a stranger,
Lost from my thought.
A skin absent of lust,
I refuse her.
Though we bond,
Love is killed by appearance.
August, trees cry tears of colors,
It was when it happened.
Temptation occurs,
Lively, a single kiss.
And I realize,
Internally she is unrivaled.
Therein lies beauty,
Lasting always, untouched by time.
After while though,
I hear grim news.
The night veils,
Locked her fate.
As my eyes weaken,
In my soul, with it.
Torn from me,
Lost to distance.
And though gloomy,
I understand.
Time separates us,
Lily, reunited you and I, when I die.
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I didn't really like the last verse since it was longer than all the other ones but I wanted to stay true to my A-I-T-L pattern. And this is completely fictional, I don't know anyone named Lily. I just felt spontaneous one day. Well, tell me what you guys think and I may or may not listen.