VS Bees' ROB
You really need to learn when and when not to pluck a turnip. You were trying to approach him at the start (and you had enough distance to turnip pluck, even without bad stick) and a turnip really would have helped your approach. You also seemed to have difficulty with his reflector; use a float Fair and **** him.
You also need to work on linking attacks together; it's why people like Illmatic are so successful with Peach. He hits you with one move and it most likely turns into a combo. I feel like you don't quite have the concept of it.
An example is 0:56. He let you hit him with Nair (his fault) and you followed his DI. But instead of following up with a dash-> shorthop Fair (or shield->OoS punishment on his to be poorly spaced Fair), you turnip pulled.
1:07- I flinched. You should've seen the Bair coming and airdodged diagonally down to the left (putting yourself in position for sweet spot umbrella).
You also need to work on buffering your aerials (particularly Fair when fullhopped). You would jump and then try to Fair and he'd Fair you before it came out. If you had buffered the Fair with your jump, you would've at least clashed.
You also don't really grab a lot... or at all (I think I saw you try to grab him once?) and your glide toss game is really weak, possibly from using bad stick.
Your Fair spacing was beautiful though
Then again you have me on block and probably won't end up reading this (I'll get to the rest of the videos tomorrow and maybe someone can quote me so you can see your critique).
I'm just going to quote this so so you can see it Meno.
Anyways, I'm going to critique the same match.
Your First Stock
From the start of the match, Bees was the one applying pressure and not you. It shouldn't be this way with Peach, imo - especially against ROB. His stature is so large there shouldn't be a reason why you aren't ground float nairing his shield, ground float bairing his shield, or of course float -> dairing his shield repeatedly.
Instead, you decided to basically throw out fsmashes, ftilts, and toss poorly thrown turnips - which really isn't going to do much especially at that low of percentage. Fsmash is really laggy and can get you punished and ftilt really only strings into itself, a fair, dsmash, or a ground floated aerial. Really work on using dair more, especially in float. You're going to pressure your opponents more and see a lot of progress. Also, don't stay on the ground too much against ROB - all of his grounded moves are pretty quick and are basically better than Peach's, the air is the way to go.
:44 really nice use of Z drop turnips -> dair. See how when you apply a bit more pressure ROB doesn't know what to do? At :47 after you threw your turnip to get more damage (which was really nice) you could have nair'd him again so he couldn't have fair'd you.
For the rest of the first stock, you were applying pressure but in all the wrong ways, imo. You don't really mess with the opponent as Peach with turnips and fair. But there were a few very well placed fairs.
Your Second Stock
1:14 was a great opportunity to land a nair, but you redeemed yourself with the bair.
Nice read at 1:32, but when playing against ROB - stop messing with turnips near the edge. He has GREAT recovery options, one little turnip isn't going to do much, get out there and kill that motha ****a.
Good job killing him, but don't dance around with turnips afterwards like previously mentioned.
2:09 - 2:16 probably your best moment in the match. Good job hitting with fair and then stringing together all those attacks. The sh dair -> nair was good. All of that probably could have been more damage with dair though
You die and get hit by the laser, recover low versus ROB.
Third Stock
Nice toad use at 2:56
Good use of nair at 3:06 and 3:11
Nice fair at 3:40
3:56 he was practically begging for a punish. Ftilt would have worked.
Could have punished him at 4:13
At 4:30 you knew he was coming to do his dumb fair stuff. Work on shielding more in instances where you know he's approaching and then just out of shield nair or bair when he hits your shield. It's a lot better than just going into a float with a terrible airdodge and it's really broken, something you have to work on.
You die because you uair, it's far too risky in that situation especially with ROB's pretty good nair. Try utilting next time.
Overall your Peach is pretty unique but it really needs to work on like the staple stuff.
Pressuring with more gf nairs, bairs, and float -> dairs.
More shieldgrabs.
Out of shield nairs and bairs.
Strings / Combos
Learning when to pull turnips and when to use them.
Nice things about your Peach
Nice fairs
Cool use of turnips (z dropping and stuff)
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