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At least at the end of that the the wolf comes and eats everyone.This is the thread that cried wolf.
**** that, I guess Scav has forfeited his rights as a judge. ^_~ Time to see the other results!Oh, wow
Scav just told me his computer that had all of the scores just crashed and won't start up.
Isn't this lovely
Oh crap...No, no jokes
Because everyone hates you. Including the dead guy who heard a voice saying, "RISE FROM YOUR GRAVE.", and decided to come back from the dead just to post that he hates you.But you guys had fun writing it, right?
I mean, it's all about the writing experience, not the prize.
...
Why do I feel like everyone hates me now?
AAAAAAaahahaa that's awesome. But I'm pretty sure Scav's been barren for a while. The last time he was this late we tore out her ovaries and strangled him with them.For some God-forsaken reason, I was about to use the analogy that Scav was having labor troubles with the scores and that's why they are being delayed. Then I realized exactly what that meant and I felt bile creep up in my throat.
You're just saying that because you're a zombie. Zombie's hate everything (except brains).Because everyone hates you. Including the dead guy who heard a voice saying, "RISE FROM YOUR GRAVE.", and decided to come back from the dead just to post that he hates you.
Good night, I'm going back to death.
...You're just saying that because you're a zombie. Zombie's hate everything (except brains).
But seriously, it wont take as long as last time. It's only been a couple of weeks and everyone's freaking out. Trust me, scores will be posted very soon.
You're right. I was being prejudice. It's just that I haven't had good experiences with zombies. I hope you understand....
That's a very biased comment. Have you ever even met a zombie? Well, being one, I can tell you that we DON'T hate everything. We just eat living people because there aren't enough people like us and we want friends.
Come to me, Scav...
It sure wasn't true last time.You're right. I was being prejudice. It's just that I haven't had good experiences with zombies. I hope you understand.
Judges: if I were to say that scores will be posted by Sunday, would that be a true statement?
This does not bode well.Okay, guys, I know you're all sick of waiting, so I'm going to post my critiques. Well, one of them. Without the name of the writer, and with all the specific details that might give away the story edited out. Good luck guessing!
Adherence to Prompt- 2/5 Not a very original idea.
Spelling and Grammar- 2/5 Did you even proofread this? Seriously. You can't even keep "there" and its brethren straight.
Characterization- 1/10 Congratulations! Your protagonist is so well-developed that he could very well be from a Uwe Boll film. And regarding your dialogue, allow me to quote Harrison Ford: "You can write this **** but you can't say it."
Style- 2/10 This reads like it was written by a fourth grader. Are you sure that you're old enough to be entering this contest? Just because you don't take it seriously doesn't mean you have to embarrass yourself.
Plot- 1/10 This is almost as good as an episode of Dragonball Z!!!!
Theme- 0/5 Please don't insult me with this pedantic high school bull****.
Comments, very much yes. Scores, very much not yet ...WWYP4 Scores and Comments (SCORES NOW POSTED!).
That's mine.Okay, guys, I know you're all sick of waiting, so I'm going to post my critiques. Well, one of them. Without the name of the writer, and with all the specific details that might give away the story edited out. Good luck guessing!
Adherence to Prompt- 2/5 Not a very original idea.
Spelling and Grammar- 2/5 Did you even proofread this? Seriously. You can't even keep "there" and its brethren straight.
Characterization- 1/10 Congratulations! Your protagonist is so well-developed that he could very well be from a Uwe Boll film. And regarding your dialogue, allow me to quote Harrison Ford: "You can write this **** but you can't say it."
Style- 2/10 This reads like it was written by a fourth grader. Are you sure that you're old enough to be entering this contest? Just because you don't take it seriously doesn't mean you have to embarrass yourself.
Plot- 1/10 This is almost as good as an episode of Dragonball Z!!!!
Theme- 0/5 Please don't insult me with this pedantic high school bull****.
Be consistent, please >_>AAAAAAaahahaa that's awesome. But I'm pretty sure Scav's been barren for a while. The last time he was this late we tore out her ovaries and strangled him with them. .
Ah, er, um - ... yay?WWYP4 Scores and Comments (SCORES NEVER TO BE POSTED EVER EVER EVER)
BAHAHAHAHAOr the other MF.
One who attempts to impregnate or invade his/her biological female parent; incest .Or the other MF.
Listen to the podcast. That'll make it worse.Scav is a girl?
this is all very confusing...
Bah, I don't even care anymore. It was fun writing the story.
Let's all leave Scav alone, now, I'm sure he feels really, really bad.
Man, the only one of those edits I made was the "SCORES NOW POSTED" one. The rest were other people.I don't know why you guys are all confused. For once Rev isn't lying in the topic title.